Review Detail of Darkling_Dark in D & O System

Low Quality Trash. Simp, Wimp, Moron MC. Sl*tty sister. Sharing power for no reason. Ppl who says he is getting occlumency in return are idiots. MC has a copy ability. He could have got any power from anyone. The biggest error of the author is making him a granger. Most ppl literally hates hermione, this includes me. Some ppl does not like muggleborns in potterverse as they are simply refugees of wizarding world. They act like Muggle world is a fairy tale, everything is perfectly balanced and asks noble lines of purebloods to bend over for them. So if your target readers are kids go with muggleborn/pro-muggle heroic characters who gives freebies to everyone. If your target readers are adults go with pureblood mc and make him SMART not santa. Be a villain and/or anti-hero.