Review Detail of Xandalar in D & O System

Item: D & O System
Rating: 3.4

Review detail

XandalarLv133yrXandalar

good story but personally is dislike when mc shares his "personal power" with other people that's why te fic isn't for me. But the quality of the story is great so far but like I said it just interesting for me.

D & O System

Mike_Lu

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ninjapanda37Lv5ninjapanda37

Mc isn't really 'sharing' his personal skills, the first one was the exercise he created and gave to Hermione since he thought she was normal and the second was the danger sense but he got Occlumency as a trade off.

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lurkinghermitLv5lurkinghermit

Thanks for saving my timex9

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uflesh940Lv3uflesh940

I feel like your comment, although valid, is ultimately misleading, and inapplicable to the story in question. The comment implies that he's giving away personal power to strangers for no gain, while, in reality, he's teaching his sister a couple of tricks, in return for her knowledge on occulemency.

3yr

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thanks for saving my time ×13

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