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Shin_Chan_53341dReplied to DevilDarknessCh 58 Liv is crazy and a little scary- Shin_Chan_53343dCommentedCh 58 Liv is crazy and a little scary
- Shin_Chan_53345dReplied to DevilDarknessCh 57 Smooth actions
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Wait I'm a little confused. So, MC is fine if she kills his people? That's kinda pathetic? I'm assuming they gonna have the 'talk' once they wake, but if not for the great author's hand, all these people could actually be dead right. I hope he doesn't just simply forgive her for this mess, though I doubt this wuss has any balls to say anything to her. I mean I understand the girl, it's good too, a more normal reaction than the usual, but your MC is just not alpha enough. How he mans up before the paid chaps begin. I don't wanna spend money on a sissy MC
Ch 57 Smooth actions - Shin_Chan_53347dCommented
Yup, this was what I was talking about. Didn't disappoint me brotha
Liv tried to free herself but only ended up falling back on the sofa, as he just pulled her hands above her head and pinned them there with his one hand. - Shin_Chan_53347dCommented
Man I do hope this doesn't go on for too long. Rn it's chill coz he actually deserved it but I don like seeing MC tasks to much of a loss. Don't want it to be one jade beauty licking dog to other . Also will he get power ups? It seems he's weaker than the girl rn.
And he was right. She was. According to her logic, didn't he like to roam around all the famous shops and shopping malls for days to weeks, everytime he wanted to give a gift to that bitch, Aarvi. Then the least she should do is just drag him for a day to make him feel a little bit annoyed. - Shin_Chan_533419dReplied to Sidius_Cross
Are u assuming gender of the devil mate
Speak of the devil and she shall come. That was what Stevron thought as a smile came to him and saw Arthur smiling back. - Shin_Chan_533420dReplied to Ikaru5
Yh bro exactly. This is a good story and that's why I'm not getting into it. I think a good analogy would be that I come to webnovel for fast food but your story is a gourmet cuisine. It's the type of story I'd buy the whole book for and read in one go. Then wait droolingly for the next book in the series to come.OK maybe not that good but u get my point right. What I want on webnovel is stuff where I'm having a bad day, I see this one dude reigning over it all, a typical power fantasy.So just know that I'm definitely not criticising your work. It's kust not what I'm looking for rn.
Ch 19 Chapter 14: Put money in thy purse...Bitch! Part 2 - Shin_Chan_533420dCommented
Idk man I wanted to like this guy's family but I just don't like it. They reduce his age and almost everything they have done till now has somehow put the MC in a more dangerous position.Also too many characters have been introduced. Too many organisations. I'm a little worried about the future of this story.Maybe I should be happy? I don't know where the story is going so it'll intrigue me right? Then there's the fact that he seems like too small a piece in too large a board. I don't really feel he has any real allies till now either. Ig I'm just used to slightly OP MCs by now. I mean I'm reading litharems instead of epic fantasies so yeah. I'll take a break from this one for now.Best wishes to you my man. I honestly love your MC, dude has brought a smile on my face since the first chapter.
Ch 19 Chapter 14: Put money in thy purse...Bitch! Part 2 - Shin_Chan_533429dCommentedCh 18 Notice
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Man this Mc is za best in za west
(*Can you read my mind, Gayward?! I'm thinking of the number 3!!*) - Shin_Chan_53341mthCommented
Uh is this cannon following B's?He joined potter's group, potter being leader and all. Atleast he seems like that for now.See I am all for morally good mcs even griffyndor is fine by me. Just CONFIRM that it won't just be a re-write of the plot with Ron doing something extra here and there. Instead u'll change the story as we progress.My cynic aside, I like how you have written till now, you have a refreshing writing. Hope you continue 😊. Tftc
Ch 7 Little Rascals - Shin_Chan_53341mthCommentedCh 13 Chapter 11: This game is ridiculously easy to play!
- Shin_Chan_53341mthCommentedCh 4 Platform 9¾
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Those pipes need repairs 😏
"Heh, didn't I go out for a basketball match last week? I bought it then!" Ishizaki raised his eyebrows, looking excited, making Konda and Komiyama excited as well. They discussed gathering at Ishizaki's dorm later to thoroughly critique it. (t/n: it's porn.) - Shin_Chan_53341mthCommented
bang Khoshi?
Kyoshi couldn't really fight back since her arms were pretty banged up and so were her feet. She fell over and then tried to crawl but I helped her up and handed her her crutches and said "I'm sorry for beating your ass, please forgive me I may be the dark avatar but I'm the one in control not Vaatu so I'm really just a neutral avatar" - Shin_Chan_53341mthCommented
ayo. Nice story mate. See u in the next novel
Those were his last words before he passed out, succumbing to death as even his eyes were no longer willing to work for him as he lost more blood. - Shin_Chan_53341mthCommented
Ayo thanks for the info.So Kora is strong. Let's hope mc is stronger
(BTW this chapter takes place around where season 2 ep 10 would be in legend of korra) - Shin_Chan_53341mthCommented
scale the what
I said to this nice man "No there is not, now run" he started running and so did I but just at a higher speed I used my fire to speed myself up and soon I was home I lit my mask aflame to destroy the evidence then used metal bending to scale the side of the building and into my room and I fell asleep.