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Here is my review on this book. I don't mind the grammar as everyone has a different starting and learns from there. The story concept, characters, power system,.. all good. ✅ But Kim Jin Woo's thoughts of hiding his power just because he doesnt want to bring him and his family trouble was kinda poorly played 😥 I'm not sure of a better alternative so i respect your story. But this is what I think; After finding himself back in his original world, same starting as you did but instead of him talking about hiding his powers, we use actions instead of words. For example, in the dungeon, while Eunbi and her squad were getting decimated, he still help them but less thought about hiding his powers. When it is repeated and contradicting, it gets annoying. For example, he doesnt want to fight, but next second decideds to fight. It will have been better not to go as a porter the second time but instead bring the fight to him to get him involved in the story. Well, that's all, thanks and keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to your improvement in all.

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I Am The Anti-Mage

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That's great input for me! Thank you for your kindly advice. ^^