Review Detail of Inferno_Vor in Cliche Fanfic with Multiverse Travel. (Indefinite Hiatus/Dead)

The writing was pretty meh at the beginning and annoying to read, but the author improved largely about chapter 20 or so. Honestly mostly like the story. It's your classic system MC going for a harem but some stories proved you can make it worse then it is so this is a refreshment personally. The biggest complaint is how rushed and cringe it is at start, but honestly it isn't THAT bad, just annoying. It becomes better the longer you read. The characters could be better. Kinda rushed development and it's felt since we're early in the story, but I think it'll be better next world since it'll feel more natural for them to be together like they are. Stable updates, nothing much to add there. I recommend giving it a read and bearing through the more cringe or forced moments.