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Zader

Zader

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I like: DanMachi+FFs, Darksouls, Souls type games [Code Vein etc.], Final Fantasy VII, Final Fantasy Tactics, "The Gamer", Gamer-FFs, Self-insert-FFs, Terror Infinity+FFs, "System"-FFs, WoW-FFs, etc.

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  • Zader
    Zader15d
    Posted

    Honestly WAS really good and interesting... Until dumb drama of "Because PLOT" levels of Drama was added/happened. Miscommunication? THAT happens and is normal. Blackmailing someone that HATES you into making them date you??? That some SPECAIL kind of Drama even Sop-op Drama's would ask what's wrong with you. The actual Game world Building? That's really well done. But everything else is just not my cup of tea. But if you only are looking for a good Game story with well thought out mechanics then you should enjoy this story. But otherwise? Mostly likely not, especially if you don't like things like blackmail cause oh boy are there more then a few in this.

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    MMORPG: Rebirth as an Alchemist
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  • Zader
    Zader1mth
    Replied to Maybonnie

    Always and forever.

    The familia Mc will join is already set.
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    DanMachi: New Sun
    Anime & Comics ¡ Demon_King22
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  • Zader
    Zader3mth
    Commented

    Baby come back, you can blame it all on me.

    Ch 464 I'm back.
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    My Multiverse Trip
    Fantasy ¡ Ryan_Colman
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  • Zader
    Zader4mth
    Replied to Master_Celestial

    Anime Simulation System by:NoFeetManit's Simulations are more detailed in that the story plays-out/lives them, rather than this stories more just options based on what/how the MC is. (Sadly seems to have been dropped).. Which like mentioned before makes this story unique as it more follows what a CYOA actually IS, with the Anime Simulation System acting more like how all other Simulation System Stories that I've read so far.

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    Danmachi: I have a Simulator!
    Anime & Comics ¡ Novelette_Seeker
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  • Zader
    Zader4mth
    Replied to Heng_Sothy

    Just life in general I would guess as that sounds about right. Lol

    "As for the Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan, stop making trouble. I don't have any brothers or sisters in this life. Even if I did, my brothers and sisters don't have Sharingan." Muttering in his heart, Aston opened the attribute panel and looked at the changes.
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    Danmachi: I'm Leveling Up In The Dungeon
    Anime & Comics ¡ Metarln
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  • Zader
    Zader5mth
    Posted

    The Simulation system is a literal legitimate CYOA (Choose Your Own Adventure) story system but one with actual tangible rewards base on how well the MC does. And I gotta say that is an amazing concept that I've never seen before. I am worried about how the plot will work out as a system like this IS fascinating, but easily and quickly will/can run into "The Gamer" issue of the MC reaching a point so unbelievably powerful in such a short time that the writer HAS to railroad ways in such that the MC at least has a chance to loose/fail, and even those that are done correctly are very few in number. Or the writer just doesn't try and the story becomes nothing but wish fulfillment power fantasy that a 10-12 year old would think is the best thing since a pizza and ice cream party/birthday. Those CAN be fun once in awhile too no matter how old you get/are. The dialogue comes out a bit strange so far, with the MC literally SAYING he is a new arrival to someone and them responding by asking the MC if they are new here... And that is just one of many instances. So dialogues need re-orderings if not full rewrites. Otherwise treat it like a half CN translated story and turn part of your brain off when reading... Here is to hoping that things turn out great and looking forward to reading more, if for nothing else than because of this story's spin on a simulation system. This was written after chapter 10 (just after starting chapter 11 Rewards)

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    Danmachi: I have a Simulator!
    Anime & Comics ¡ Novelette_Seeker
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  • Zader
    Zader5mth
    Replied to Forgottenpain

    Excuses you and your entire race. Hestia IS Bestia.

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    Danmachi: I have a Simulator!
    Anime & Comics ¡ Novelette_Seeker
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  • Zader
    Zader5mth
    Posted

    nothing but more p....tron writting.nothing but more p....tron writting.

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  • Zader
    Zader6mth
    Commented

    Second lol. Great chapter.

    Ch 140 Chapter 139
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    BNHA: Singularity
    Anime & Comics ¡ Einlion
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  • Zader
    Zader6mth
    Commented

    There IS a reason even fighters WISH they could be Mages. I mean why else would the always go on about "I cast FIST!" when its just a punch, read one story that went even more so by have IT BE a spell that adds special effects to a punch (like a SLIGHT/dim glow of light/etc) but don't actually DO any thing. Then there is the Rogues and Thieves that again us SPELLS like invisibly or Shadow stuff because even they wish to be Mages. In short EVERYONE want to be able to throw Fireballs/etc... And shoot Kamehameha Waves but that's just a different type of Magic... Ki/Qi is BS "Do whatever I want to" which again is Magic's whole thing so ergo Ki/Qi is Magic just not the normal kind.

    (A/N: It never hurts to have a Mage in the party o3o...)
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    BNHA: Singularity
    Anime & Comics ¡ Einlion
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  • Zader
    Zader8mth
    Replied to Linda_Thompson_6128

    Sauce of the FF? That sounds like it would be something interesting.

    Ch 91 Chapter 91 : A Talk With Ino (Rewrite)
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    In Naruto With Minato Template
    Anime & Comics ¡ kamidemond
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  • Zader
    Zader9mth
    Replied to Absolution3

    Spoiler for Danmachi Lili's 1st "Life" she was known as the Fire/Flame Blood/Crimson Spear, and having Glowing red Eyes. Look into DanMachi's lore as it's really well done. World of DanMachi past life's HEAVILY determine your next. 2nd BIGGER Spoiler Reason Lili got so screwed even though last life was a Hero enough for ALL Palums to agree that she was their race Goddess, is because her brother took the weapon/object she was known for a Spear... Her brother's Soul/past life is Fin the Captain of Loki familia... And cause HE had her spear when THAT life died ITS "Record" was added to his Soul and NOT Lili's... All hers had was being a "Fake Goddess" and so "Scum/Blasphemous" that should suffer... This also why Bell has such MASSIVE cheats he is/was THE First Hero according to the Gods, and THEY manage the cycle of reincarnation so... At least that is how I understood it, but I'm no where NEAR always right so might have gotten something wrong.

    Ch 9 Chapter 9 Commissioned by Kriegan. R-18 Midget Lewds Beware
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    My Upgrades are Invincible. Rewrite
    Anime & Comics ¡ Azazyel
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  • Zader
    Zader10mth
    Replied to Einlion

    So what your saying just wait til she transforms into a more "Human" form THEN we're good.... Lol couldn't resist. Felix seems alright so no problems with that pair. Still wanting a harem though cause you make them really well IMO. TFTC👍

    Ch 46 A New Dawn
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    Keystone, an Awesome Parallel Plane Adventure
    Fantasy ¡ Einlion
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  • Zader
    Zader10mth
    Replied to DaoistPrFUPv

    Agreed. Loose a lot of interest in stories that add them if not out right drop/ignore them because very few actually do them in a believe able way, most just make/use them "Pure Whimsical Chaos" when most are "Curious Chaos" if anything, NOT DC Jokers plus tentacles...

    'Kill him, Higuchi-kun~ the most bloody way possible'.
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    High School of the Dead: Zombie World with a Gacha
    Anime & Comics ¡ Photosphere
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  • Zader
    Zader11mth
    Commented
    A/N: I PASSED! I'M A DOCTOR NOW!! 1 year of mandatory internship, and I'll have my degree!!!
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    A Crazy Journey Through Fiction
    Others ¡ manny0101
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  • Zader
    Zader1yr
    Commented

    Is this based of an actual CYOA if so what one? Or just using the idea of a CYOA instead? Thanks for the Chapter. Looks like it will be another great story.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 Commissioned by, Definitely not Dio
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    Myriad Apocalypse's
    Anime & Comics ¡ Azazyel
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  • Zader
    Zader1yr
    Commented

    Sounds great. But do be careful of burn out so try not to force yourself to do two chapters a day especially with the amount of research needed for a story like this. Because I honestly can't/couldn't find any other Ultimate Evolution FFs especially this well done so please. Keep up the Good Work 😁👍 BUT also take breaks if/as needed too lol 👌

    Ch 51 Author's notice
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    Infinite Evolution: A spy in multiverse
    Movies ¡ _Crimson_
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  • Zader
    Zader1yr
    Replied to Classic_sans

    I was thinking more like Dark Souls lol

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    Multiversal Library
    Anime & Comics ¡ ExoticSenta
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  • Zader
    Zader1yr
    Commented

    Sounds great looking forward to it. Also... The thought that best rabbit girl had before showed this is canon. O.O And very interested so see how it goes. Keep up the good work 👍

    (A/N: I did my best to resist, but after reading through nearly every paragraph and chapter comment, it's evident that most people reading the novel want it to be a harem. However, at the risk of spoiling things, though nothing is canon until written, I don't plan for Izuku to end up with 'every' girl. Rather, much like Captain Celebrity, once he settles down and has a kid, he'll probably stick with one, maybe three girls at most. As for when he'll have a kid, well, that's for the distant future. Like, perhaps even 'decades' into the story's plot. As for what that plot is, I think most of you will be pleasantly surprised. It certainly isn't canon (O v O)...)
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    BNHA: Singularity
    Anime & Comics ¡ Einlion
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  • Zader
    Zader1yr
    Commented

    I say go for as I haven't read any stories that do add her as a interest. Yes she is in most stories one way or another but never in an Harem. As she is always bad in some way.

    Ch 45 Waifu Poll (Lordran Edition): V1.5!
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    A Soulsborne's Traveler System
    Anime & Comics ¡ Bronz_Deck
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