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2021-08-10 11:10

I will tell a great story, but there are paragraphs in the novel that I did not like, especially the way of the initial death of the hero + the childishness of the top is also disturbing and lacks a lot of rationality. It also does not appear He's in his thirties and his story is a bit procrastinating. I'm sorry if I hurt anyone with my words, it's only my opinion, but she is a capable and talented writer and does not seem to be repeated

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