Review Detail of Aeternabilis in Game of Thrones: The Sun of Winter

Item: Game of Thrones: The Sun of Winter
Rating: 3

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AeternabilisLv133yrAeternabilis

Premis of the story is great, however, the thing that ruins it for me is that the English and grammar etc is sht. Then the author tries to use the correct terms? For the Got vers making it even more complex and difficult to read. Things like 5 name days have passed, this type of dialect

Game of Thrones: The Sun of Winter

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SpackRoxLv13SpackRox

I agree with the first part. The grammar and sentenced structure is really bad. The author should atleast use Grammarly for editing.

3yr

Legends_27Lv1Legends_27

Oh come on shut up you sponsored person, somehow

3yr

TranshumanistLv14Transhumanist

Writing quality is killing me. I couldn't read more than 4 chapters. Sad thing is it isn't getting better.

3yr