Review Detail of KeCha in Redeeming The Golden Ticket To Life

There are some key factors that i like and dislike about this book. 1) i like the transmigration from future to past. 2) i like how she’s already married with a kid. Plus the interaction from father to child. I guess that’s just the plot. 1) I don’t like how this story is written in first point of view. I guess that’s just preference. It’s a little weird for a story because there’s a clear distinction between reader and character. For example, if a scene was acted out with the protagonist laughing, we as the viewer literally see that. In a story format in first point of view, the reader will be reading “I laughed”. I find that very off putting because i didn’t laugh. I don’t know if you get what i mean. I think third point of view(he/she/(name)/they) will be a better option. 2) Grammar and coherence. Some sentences can be structured more fluently so it can flow better.