Review Detail of Rice_Loving_Daoist in Unparalleled After Ten Consecutive Draws

It definitely could be better, but this is just really another generic plot with its own twist on comedy and overpowered abilities and cool stuff, and there is nothing wrong with that, if you like it, then good for you, if not, also good for you (just drop it then). It progresses like any other story, it just feels like less progress because he starts quite high in regards to power, plus the translation error/errors lead to some... interesting misunderstandings. I doubt the author meant it but, the characters for 12 and 20 are similar; being 十二 and 二十. Some I hope its a typo