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Rice_Loving_Daoist2yrPostedIt definitely could be better, but this is just really another generic plot with its own twist on comedy and overpowered abilities and cool stuff, and there is nothing wrong with that, if you like it, then good for you, if not, also good for you (just drop it then). It progresses like any other story, it just feels like less progress because he starts quite high in regards to power, plus the translation error/errors lead to some... interesting misunderstandings. I doubt the author meant it but, the characters for 12 and 20 are similar; being 十二 and 二十. Some I hope its a typo
- Rice_Loving_Daoist2yrCommentedThe metallic door opened after a beeping sound, revealing a big lap on the other side of the room. Many machines could be seen placed all around the room.
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And so the plot thickens
"It's not that. You know his powers, right? He can erase the powers of people. If he knew Lucifer was so dangerous, he might have asked me to stop all the spending on the cell and the anti-decaying liquid." - Rice_Loving_Daoist2yrCommented"One Profound Yin Pill of the lowest quality already costs 3,000 Premium Points, yet I am willing to do what the Profound Yin Pill does by increasing one's Yin Qi for as little as 100 Premium Points. Now if that isn't a bargain, then I don't know what is."
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Yes, funny you are, hilarious you be Master Yoda
Funny? He is? That is something new. Bai Zemin shook his head and continued eating his dinner while looking ahead. - Rice_Loving_Daoist2yrCommented
If you know Yourself, and you know your Enemy, you will not lose a hundred battles - Technoblade
Know what you are capable of doing, learn about your enemy, plan, and you will emerge invincible in every battle. This was a proverb that Bai Zemin had been fond of since he was young. - Rice_Loving_Daoist2yrCommentedCh 8 08 - Super Fortress
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system took*
'They are even worse than monsters. Maybe the system to that in account.' - Rice_Loving_Daoist2yrCommented
You* instead of you've
You've didn't lose sight of your future and hence you've proven your worth. - Rice_Loving_Daoist2yrCommented
"Those white bast*rds", kinda sus
"Is it possible that those white bast*rds already knew that this dungeon was a trans-dimensional dungeon?" Arnold thought as he carefully looked around the forest he was in, "As far as I know, there's no way they could have known it..." - Rice_Loving_Daoist2yrCommentedCh 74 Confusion (1)