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Jmtxam
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If you write a fanfiction with an oc, at least give the oc original lines. You're basically making the oc say things that the other characters would have said if she wasn't there....................................

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kaboo
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Thanks! Scar does have her own lines. There are just some lines in the show that are too iconic not to include and in some cases the character who said it is not in the scene, but my oc is. Some people on this site in particular don’t take to my book too well because it is a fanfiction with a female protag. Most disheartening comments about how I write my original character in the series are actually only from men. I just don’t think my pov is what you guys are looking to read. Thank you for the input, but I enjoy what I write and what I have created xx

Jmtxam
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It's really not about the gender of the mc, I don't care either way about that, it's just my feeling that the mc isn't really adding anytthing new to the story...

kaboo:Thanks! Scar does have her own lines. There are just some lines in the show that are too iconic not to include and in some cases the character who said it is not in the scene, but my oc is. Some people on this site in particular don’t take to my book too well because it is a fanfiction with a female protag. Most disheartening comments about how I write my original character in the series are actually only from men. I just don’t think my pov is what you guys are looking to read. Thank you for the input, but I enjoy what I write and what I have created xx