Review Detail of Gunkman in Stray
Review detail
The main character Scarlet is essentially a combination of Rick,Andrea,Beth, and Carol. And when I say a combination, I mean it. alot of what she says and does are directly stripped from the characters in the show. Like word for word and action for action. The author also sticks to closely to the progression of the show making it irrelevant if the main character or the other oc's were there at all.
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Hello! Thank you for the review and taking the time to read pretty far into it. It is a walking dead fanfiction so I did want to stick fairly close to the script and storyline because I enjoy it so much. I really just wanted to stick a pov from an outside character where you could look inside my brain on how I veiw each oc and what I would feel being in that moment with them. But I totally understand what you are saying and I appreciate the honesty xx
it's cool that you replied, and I understand that you want to stick close to the story but I feel that Scar is to much on the outside (as a character) I guess. To the point that her actions or inactions don't mean anything. I enjoy the story, I really do but I also am currently rewatching TWD so the events of the show are fresh in my mind and the dialogue copy/paste sticks out quite a bit.