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Review Detail of Ashmodai in Dragon In The Multiverse

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Ashmodai
AshmodaiLv43yrAshmodai

The Story is a typical wish fulfillment Harem Story with redundant wishes and no explanations for some abilities and Plotholes that make no sense. Some people like this stuff but it's not my type.

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Dragon In The Multiverse

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TeeNo
TeeNoAuthorTeeNo

Some abilities don't need explaining, but Indo explain the ones that need explaining. Also, could you show me the plot holes? I'll try to fix them.

TeeNo
TeeNoAuthorTeeNo

I do*

TeeNo:Some abilities don't need explaining, but Indo explain the ones that need explaining. Also, could you show me the plot holes? I'll try to fix them.
SageOfSins
SageOfSinsLv3SageOfSins

plot hole being that he is a dragon but can't seem to do a decent exercise without breaking a sweat. fix that now will you.. and also why does all women he meet losses their cognitive functions when infront of him...?

TeeNo:Some abilities don't need explaining, but Indo explain the ones that need explaining. Also, could you show me the plot holes? I'll try to fix them.