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Requiem_Soul
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2021-02-23 16:44

First of all the story is good all but the things is the content inside this novel. Somehow robin get caught by the marine and throw into prison naked and bare. ANDDD the guards feed robin aphrodisiac on daily basis and they even put a finger ir two in her pussy. like seriusly i dont even know what the **** is the author thinking of writing this. I know the world one piece is a brutal world but then do you need to really fucking put sexual assault and rape toward his harem girls? I mean do you have some weird fetish or something? I dont even care if its some cannon fodder in one piece world but toward Main Character girls? Instant drop lol even if i know the mc yet again somehow saved here before the guars his dick in Robin. Fucking regret reading

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Zibarn
ZibarnAuthor

Sorry to hear that, but thanks for your constructive criticism.

Croissance
CroissanceLv4

Thanks man you've just saved me

Aioria619
Aioria619Lv4

the rape in one piece I doubt that it exists unless they are pirates, I doubt very much that the marines are rapists 99% of the marines are good people

Tsubasa1
Tsubasa1Lv5

I'm out then

Ryofu
RyofuLv11

Thanks for the info, I just read the comment and not the chapter and I already saw 4 point that prevented me from reading this FF. - From the three Girls the MC will be with, only Robin is interesting. - Only three girls in OP is a sin to all the good women that never got attention from the OG story (my own opinion xD). - In the chapter 17 a comment said "just do not repeat the incident of "Nico robin", people did not like to read when they almost desecrated the girls who entered the harem" and the Author responded with "I don't like things like that as well and for that reason it will only be three girls for the MC." So the same situation that happened to Robin will most likely repeat itself... - Vivi married Koza after he led a revolt against her father leading to his death.

Ryofu
RyofuLv11

To precise something more, it's not the marine that tried to rape Robin but the Guard of Alabasta when she was put in prison beneath the royal palace...

Aioria619:the rape in one piece I doubt that it exists unless they are pirates, I doubt very much that the marines are rapists 99% of the marines are good people
SCP_0999
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Kr0n
Kr0nLv11

thanks for the warning.

noiceguy420
noiceguy420Lv5

can you upload

Zibarn:Sorry to hear that, but thanks for your constructive criticism.
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