Review Detail of NopeNinjaJambo in I'm a Stingray?
Review detail
An interesting concept for a system story and definitely a fresh read if you are sick to death of face slapping and MCs who are suddenly cultivation gods, master craftsmen, and unbeatable fighters. The descriptions of most of ocean’s creatures seem to be accurate and researched. The combat is descriptive and easy to follow, yet still paced well enough to remain exciting. The dialogue is good and the main character is likable. Nice usage of side-characters as well. Updates regularly and the author is responsive in comments. I gave good marks all around. Only constructive criticisms would be some minor pronoun mistakes once in awhile that makes one or two paragraphs a little confusing, but it only occurs A couple times. Would definitely recommend. 🤘
I'm a Stingray?
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Ninja! I was hoping that you'd leave a review. Honestly this could be one of the best reviews I got so far, I appreciate you. But on the other side of the stick, rest assured that the paragraphs are getting fixed; the first chapters especially, have been bombarded with edits. I'm tryna make sure that both your money and time is worthwhile here. Thank you for your time, and I'm happy you enjoyed the story!
Thank you for your kind words and the well placed stick reference! I believe writing is vastly underappreciated, yet overevaluated here and elsewhere as if they were on the scale of movie films. A fiction story should be entertaining; a review should provide enough detail for a reader to determine if they would be entertained and whether the investment in time or money is worthwhile. Its my opinion that you story is, my review does, and the investment is totally worthwhile. Congratulations and great work on hitting over 200 chapters!
MisterE05:Ninja! I was hoping that you'd leave a review. Honestly this could be one of the best reviews I got so far, I appreciate you. But on the other side of the stick, rest assured that the paragraphs are getting fixed; the first chapters especially, have been bombarded with edits. I'm tryna make sure that both your money and time is worthwhile here. Thank you for your time, and I'm happy you enjoyed the story!
Hope you are well! I took some time off to let some chapters build up, but it seems as if you are on hiatus now. In any event I’ll start slowly catching up, take care.
MisterE05:Thank you! Tim is painfully entertaining, so the readers will realise that! 😆