Review Detail of Faelyon in Once Upon A Time (Story of The Betrothed and Farah)

The beginning is quite good. The explanation of magical characters and magical people really pulls you in. The names are a bit confusing at first but once you get into it they don't make much of a difference. I like the idea of different beings controlling yet not all powerful in the world. I'm a bit confused at the beginning as to who the characters are referencing and I don't have much information on the characters other than their status and names. Overall, I think it was quite good and I think with a few changes to the word choice it could be much better!