This is pathetic. I get it. You want him to have a tragic backstory. But why the fuxk would you give him a backstory where he was a hero who protected what he believed in 'til the end? And when he reincarnated into a world where has a loving family and was finally happy, he became a pussy. A pussy who hid while his mom is raped and killed. It's not like pirates are notorious for raping, killing and pillaging, right??? What excuse are you gonna say?? He's a kid?? Did that stop luffy? or natsu?? Even Usopp had the guts to confront the freddy kruger sword version pirate even though he knew he was going to die!! He's not a fuxking kid inside!! He was a battle hardened grown ass man who let his mother get raped and killed and left his father for dead because the author made him a pussy!! Useless fuxking backstory! Might as well shove it up your ass!!!

mc personality is trash, in fairy tail world he save girl name kagura who lost all her family because they all get killed and after that she sees the mc as her family but the mc basically throw her away like trash. idk why mc do that he should have know what it felt to lose a family, in first world one piece he loses his first and second family, i understand he doesn't like want to lose family again but to kagura perspective is like her family betrayed her and add salt to injury he show much more care to the other people who in her perspective is not a family and more like he just know other people name or aquintance. or my assumption is all wrong and author is basically unable write loving family relationship and can only write a tragedy

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Simply amazing! I love this story, the writing Quality Is Actually pretty decent, especially on this site where half Of the authors dont know That much english. I love the way the story is progressing because its different from Other fanfic stories that over uses the MC joining the straw hats. Keep it up author, your doing a good job so far👍👍👍👍👍👍

Quite good at first except for a few things who comes and crash the party a bit namely: 1: the MC have a sad backstory and all but at times it still become a bit cringe, i know FT all wear their emotions on their sleeves but quality still suffers a bit. Still better than abused and neglect stories though 2: idk if the MC plans to ever grow up but if he don't implies himself a bit more in his guild, story is just gonna become: Enzo watches canon fairy tail story and look badass on background while everyone gets some 3: The power of MC don't looks like they evolved at all except they freeze magic itself. A bit of a letdown for a supposed master of haki, devil fruit and rokushiki. Just suggestions but MC could evolve from just zoan fruit and become a full fledged take over-mage of the mythical beast variant with different elements depending on the beast : ice Yeti, fire Phoenix, wind chupacabra (picture nargacuga from Monster Hunter), thunder raijin( again zinogre from MH), water Megalodon with hybrid form looking like sage kisame... There is like dozens of possible evolution ways for MC but i have a hunch he's just gonna turn everyone in ice sculptures maybe a fruit awakening and that's all. Kinda sad when you think of the potential basic idea had oh and MC needs some hormones to get a pairing not stay stiff like cardboard and have feelings growing out of his arse when autor remember he needs them cuz having a sociopat flirting tempt to flirt mira or erza is a bit of a turnoff hope it didn't turn into a rant and autor try to take some bits out of it, it's absolutely not flame just trying to be as constructive as possible

Quite interesting novel here, not your average fanfic so far. The idea of the character so far is interesting, could be much better but hey compared to others I think the author is on to something and i'll rant a little bit here, the chapters could do better if they were a little bit longer(quality > quantity). So for an ending here, I encourage those who stumble and read my review to give this fanfic a shot, is short of now but if the author doesn't mess up and stays constant it could be something big. P.S. Author you're doing a great job so don't think of dropping the novel even if you by chance make the MC to powerfull (DON'T DO IT!) it still could work with regard to your other theme you're going Fairy Tail.

very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others

I love the devil fruit idea because it’s pretty cool. The writing quality is above average for this site with a solid update stability with mass releases. The mc is pretty cool. The background is One Piece with a few changes or I guess additions. So overall love the story and wish you the best author-san.

very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others