Item: Reality Warping in Marvel (A Crooked Man)
Rating: 1
Author: Eddicted

EddictedLv54yr

2020-10-27 04:09

very good story and idea but very bad MC with a very useless brain. iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Reality Warping in Marvel (A Crooked Man)

Bagoury

4.1

52 Chs

Liked by 4 people

Replies6

Driod324Lv4

So why rate bad?

4yr

EddictedLv5

because the MC is so bad that you will feel that you wasted your time reading this even if you like the idea behind this novel

Driod324:So why rate bad?

4yr

Driod324Lv4

So you give a horrid review for wasting 20 minutes?

4yr

EddictedLv5

yes. and i spent lot more than 20 min.........time that could have been spent on a proper book. my time is much more precious to me than you can imagine. i gave this review to save that time for any like minded people. so stop bothering me fanboy.

Driod324:So you give a horrid review for wasting 20 minutes?

4yr

Driod324Lv4

Honestly it doesn’t because when you look at what you’ve done all you do is complain so i do not think that you will lose 100,000,000,000 for wasting 20 minutes

4yr

arren_wylieLv1

im not siding but you never know, coulda won the lottery, coulda uh ye thats it, idk what im saying

Driod324:Honestly it doesn’t because when you look at what you’ve done all you do is complain so i do not think that you will lose 100,000,000,000 for wasting 20 minutes

2yr

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Klazy_LabbitLv5

this belongs in the fanfic section, just take this story down and reupload it in fanfic section. I hate seeing fanfics in the original section after all fanfics get easy votes with an already established universe whereas original need work from Author and even then they get fewer votes.

4yr

DragonGodLv14

MC has knowledge about what is gonna happen and who is dangerous but is so lazy and dimwitted even if he does have an op power he would not know how to use it right if it slapped him

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Immortal_PyrsmLv3

I gave it 1.6 because the timeline is great but the story Nah, The mc is like a side character who is the strongest. I see no path of the story in this, Like what is his goal? It said anti-hero yet he is more of a hero than that wannabe hero, He saves everyone despite knowing all the troubles why? because of fucking absolutely no reason. He said he doesn't want to abuse his powers this just like a wuxia story full of face slapping, ants are trying to kill him then boom they lose. It is fun for MC POV and Author but not for us readers, Imagine reading 10 chapters of people planning to kill MC and ridiculing the MC then 1 chapter of seeing the victory of MC......

4yr

The_Bean_GodLv14

I'd say that this is probably the best Marvel fic on this site as far as original content and the story flows pretty well. the only complaint I have is that this isn't finished book that I can binge read

4yr

iwantyouinmyswampLv4

The MC is retarded, the reviews as well. Made the MC to op so the author nerfed him by giving him a half boiled potato for brain, and a god complex, so don't get exited that you finally get to slap thanos or some shit, the MC would probably get confused and slap himself. Other than that you can read it if you have nothing better to do. Don't really recommend tho. Giving two stars for a creative idea, and taking the rest away because of the headache reading this gave me and the time I wasted

4yr

Rafael_NevesLv4

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4yr

reapersgrimLv4

Is this not A crooked man? A marvel Si fanfiction on spacebattles? 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑

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Cliffhanger_DaoistLv12

Good stuff, Good stuff, Good stuff, Good stuff, good stuff Good stuff, Good stuff, good stuff Good stuff, Good stuff, Good stuff, Good stuff, Good stuff,

4yr

eroskunLv1

I think the first thing the mc should have done is warp himself a functional brain into existence, because man he has none. The whole fanfic is just blah blah and the mc from the sidelines with no purpose no goal just a tool for already existing characters

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