Review Detail of DaoistLDdkTW in Phantom of a Devil (BL)
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I liked the conspet behind the story well enogh. The characters seem likeable and intriguing, the world at first glance pretty faszinating. The story is very convoluted and at times hard to follow. Some scence didn't seem to bein the activ storyline but memory, but it easn't clear when the timeline changed and to which the story went back. The world is also very convoluted. For me it wasn't clear what the deity and demon stuff Was. Then there were aparebtly to manydeitys, but also strong demons, that no one seem to do something about. The logic really evaded me. All over a stabile story, if you like to puzzle out what is happening all the time.
Phantom of a Devil (BL)
sharrnister
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sharrnister:Thank you for the review! For the world-building about the deities and demon thing, it was just their world: another universe/world that stays around supernatural beings living with humans like that. For now, it doesn't need to have a reason/logic of why the world is like that, but it can perhaps create one. The mystery atmosphere is on purpose, but I will make sure not to write it more confusing. I am sorry if it comes out very convoluted. tysm!
Thank you for the review! For the world-building about the deities and demon thing, it was just their world: another universe/world that stays around supernatural beings living with humans like that. For now, it doesn't need to have a reason/logic of why the world is like that, but it can perhaps create one. The mystery atmosphere is on purpose, but I will make sure not to write it more confusing. I am sorry if it comes out very convoluted. tysm!