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Oppai_Dragon_3633
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OC side characters ruin it .

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Death in Remnant

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Eternal_Ouroboros
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I'm glad you're updating this one frequently, and please don't stop, but I'm typing this out to inquire about your other RWBY fan fiction. The "I'll Reincarnate In RWBY My Way" one, I read it a while back and it's still in my library and I hadn't realized it was yours till I checked out your other works like five minutes ago. It hasn't updated in a while so I'm wondering what's happening to it, I'd love to see it continue, though this one, "Death in Remnant" is my new preferred one so don't drop it PLEASE!! Great stuff btw, keep it up!!

Splendora_Gaming:Glad you are liking it. And sure, reviews are definitely welcome.
Splendora_Gaming
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What OC side character? The only OC character I added was Aly, an older generation minion of Salem, and she was unceremoniously killed off. Dr. Merlot, however, is the antagonist from the RWBY game, and he likewise was killed off, but he was not an OC. So no idea what you are talking about.

wolffi
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I didn't read the story but just with the synopsis I think that he is talking about the three classmates.

Splendora_Gaming:What OC side character? The only OC character I added was Aly, an older generation minion of Salem, and she was unceremoniously killed off. Dr. Merlot, however, is the antagonist from the RWBY game, and he likewise was killed off, but he was not an OC. So no idea what you are talking about.
Splendora_Gaming
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well, that's dumb if that is the case, considering that I am only 14 chapters in and they'll eventually end up as a team when they reach Beacon. Sure, they were OC's for all of half of the first chapter, then they mentally became Strife, War and Fury. They have no recollection of their previous lives. So what if I make a little effort to give the give the MC's teammates I bit of backstory before jumping straight into the plot? It isn't like I have spent 50 chapters on them or anything like that.

wolffi:I didn't read the story but just with the synopsis I think that he is talking about the three classmates.
Eternal_Ouroboros
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Don't worry about it author, I love your novel and I actually think it's fine. Do go read my review! Can't wait for the next chapter :3

Splendora_Gaming:well, that's dumb if that is the case, considering that I am only 14 chapters in and they'll eventually end up as a team when they reach Beacon. Sure, they were OC's for all of half of the first chapter, then they mentally became Strife, War and Fury. They have no recollection of their previous lives. So what if I make a little effort to give the give the MC's teammates I bit of backstory before jumping straight into the plot? It isn't like I have spent 50 chapters on them or anything like that.
Splendora_Gaming
Splendora_GamingAuthorSplendora_Gaming

Glad you are liking it. And sure, reviews are definitely welcome.

Eternal_Ouroboros:Don't worry about it author, I love your novel and I actually think it's fine. Do go read my review! Can't wait for the next chapter :3
Splendora_Gaming
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well, I plan to come back to my other stories eventually, I just don't have as much time to write lately, plus I am trying to increase the quality and the length of each chapter, resulting in me not being able to update as often. Since each chapter takes longer to write and I have less time to spend working on them each day, I decided to just focus on one at a time, and for now this is the one I am focusing on. Likely when I decide to swap over after reaching a satisfactory point in this story, then I'll probably resume either my harry potter universe story or my MCU one next, but I'll likely stick with this one at least until he's travelled to another world and completed his story in two worlds. And no, that wont be the end of this story, I just might put it on hiatus a while to complete one of my other stories, then return to this for a couple volumes/worlds, then hiatus here to finish one of my other stories, before resuming here. That's my general idea at the moment at least.

Eternal_Ouroboros:I'm glad you're updating this one frequently, and please don't stop, but I'm typing this out to inquire about your other RWBY fan fiction. The "I'll Reincarnate In RWBY My Way" one, I read it a while back and it's still in my library and I hadn't realized it was yours till I checked out your other works like five minutes ago. It hasn't updated in a while so I'm wondering what's happening to it, I'd love to see it continue, though this one, "Death in Remnant" is my new preferred one so don't drop it PLEASE!! Great stuff btw, keep it up!!