I'm a typical weeb, I nap all day as I read novels and manga and also watch anime. OH! I love snacks, can't forget those. And like any other accomplished weeb, I wish to be isekai'd as an op character
Yes! Exactly, I'm glad you get it, it's hard for me sometimes to deliver a message and have others receive it as I intended it to be. Communication was never my forte.
This shit is great man!! I'm glad you opted out of dropping this, I'm really enjoying your novel so far, it's got really great character development and proper emotional scenes. Can't wait for the next chapter!! I hope you can find your motivation to power through this one, as long as chapters are coming you can be damn sure I'm gonna be reading them as they release. Thanks for the chapter, and g'day.
It’s definitely one of the better avatar fics put there. It’s got proper character developement and growth, and plus, Iroh is in it.
Thanks for the chapter author-san!! It's been a while since the last one and I was starting to really get hungry for one. Can't wait for the next chapter! Also, good job on adding your own touch to the story, as even though it's clear to see that it's following the canon's guideline of events, they're slightly different, even if it's a small tiny change, it makes all the difference when all of those changes are piled up sky high. So keep going strong, I'm really liking this fic of yours.
Hey author-san, I really enjoy the fic so far, it's great and it's keeping me captivated. It's quite quirky, the new semblance I mean, It's a really neat feature all in all. The only question I have for you about it though, is if he'll ever get in a predicament because of one of the traits of Lover's Empathy. It would be kind of off putting if something of the like did happen. Specifically speaking of the shared aura amount between Death and those who've bound themselves. Is this shared pool of aura a two way? As in Death being able to use it & those who are bound? Or is it just Death himself that can take from that pool. Or maybe it's something else entirely and I'm not quite following :3 It's a bit confusing for me, could you clarify a little please? Anyways, like I said above, great fic! Love the sh*t, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Right off the bat, the quality is, in my opinion, strikingly good. At least certainly so for the standards of this site. I've no problems understanding what I read and the chapters have a good enough fluidity that I'm pulled in wanting more. Good quality! As far as the stability of updates go, I've never cared for them, but it's also a strong point I want to highlight. The author has updated daily and stuck to that statement with the exception of a short period when their focus was on another novel. So a great stability no doubt. [MINOR SPOILERS AHEAD |:| READ AT YOUR OWN RISK] The story development is amazing, we see the main character become a master of not only his element but also of himself as a person. He seemingly breaks away from the norm and even goes as far as making his own style and innovating techniques. Hell, the guy can fly using his advanced understanding of his element. The story develops very well, the flow of events is logical and gets you hooked enough to keep reading till the end. Das de gud shiz The character design is amazing, the main character doesn't just feel like he's a construct of fiction. He's detailed enough to be understood and normal enough to relate to. His thoughts and feelings are often portrayed and written out for us to understand him, it almost feels like I'm growing with him too, as I follow him through his journey. Another great aspect of this novel, is it's authenticity. It stays true to the personality of the canon characters, mainly Master Pakku, his personality is as true as it gets. It almost feels like I'm reading an actual Avatar novel. The world background is well done, though I myself have watched the series and therefor have no need for such detailed environment, I'm more than certain that those who have not, will have no problem creating the mental image of the scenarios and events that play out. Over all, I strongly believe this novel deserves a full 5 star review even though it's still in it's beginning stages. I am eager to read more, especially so now, seeing that the author has returned and is putting their focus into this masterpiece here. And dear author, if you do end up reading my review, please drop a like, or a comment, show me you've read it. It'd mean a lot. Thanks!
I'm glad you're updating this one frequently, and please don't stop, but I'm typing this out to inquire about your other RWBY fan fiction. The "I'll Reincarnate In RWBY My Way" one, I read it a while back and it's still in my library and I hadn't realized it was yours till I checked out your other works like five minutes ago. It hasn't updated in a while so I'm wondering what's happening to it, I'd love to see it continue, though this one, "Death in Remnant" is my new preferred one so don't drop it PLEASE!! Great stuff btw, keep it up!!
You've made me hungry. Very hungry.
[Writing Quality] The writing quality of this novel is surprisingly well done compared to the usual fan fiction broken grammar you would usually expect when reading one on this site. Improvements can be made and I hope that as this project goes on, so will its quality. Great job, keep it up! [Stability of Updates] Though I've never personally cared about this aspect, I checked it out and it's a stable schedule indeed. I approve. [Story Development] I enjoyed reading the novel and the development, although on the faster end of the spectrum, isn't all that bad. The plot itself is well structured and it's an enjoyable read. [Character Design] Since this is a fan fiction, there isn't much to say about the canon characters so far except them being well portrayed and the fact that they don't feel out of character. The OCs so far are quirky and all have a reason to be in the plot and aren't there simply to be there. They're kept simple enough to ensure the plot isn't overly complicated, but spiced up enough to make sure the story doesn't get boring. Great job~! [World Background] The world background is well described, from landscape and horizons to immediate environment in tricky situation, they're all well described. I haven't seen a lot of avatar transmigration fan fictions and this one is a solid five star for me. I'm eager to read more chapters. Keep it up author!!~