Love where the story is going, where it’s gone so far. I’ve binged it all in a bit over Week and I’m loving it so much. My main thing is how well you’ve captured each character and their essence, they feel so real and fleshed out instead of ideas in a novel. Thank you for the read, I’ll be awaiting updates eagerly!!

Glad you’re back!!

Take your time, no stress.

Based.

One of my favourite DxD fics of recent time not gonna lie. I love the way things are developing and the character interactions are fresh and feel true. I already can’t wait for the next chapter, definitely reading this till the end.

I’m loving this fic very much, it’s well written, I like the mc and his powers as well as his stance. The developments and the character interactions are amazing, and a lot of DxD fics don’t go in depth with the different gods and their pantheons but this one seems to be going that direction. I can’t wait for more!!

Author has never had a gf, this is so unrealistic how quick she was able to decide and make up her mind. Phoenix host or not, powerful telepath or not, it would never be that simple.

Man is lierally doing God’s work saving us like this. Thank you good sir.

Amazing story with mind blowing twists. This will be a fic to remember and reread for a while to come.

It’s a story that has Wakfu in it, and even better, it’s the eliatropes power set which is both busted and hella freaking cool. It’s an instant 5 star review for me. I genuinely hope you don’t drop this, since it has serious potential for growth. Anyways, I’m pretty excited to see where this goes, cya when I cya.

Thanks for the chapters!! And don’t worry too much about the negative criticism, there’s amways gonna be some. Just know that you’re doing amazing and that I definitely enjoy the story. Keep going strong.

Yo the twist with future Elijah having been the author if the book was unexpected but oddly fitting.

I very much enjoyed getting a peek at the Ancient One’s perspective. It was very fitting, and maybe a little sad.

Yessss more chapters

The Ancient One in this story is so well portrayed, you’ve done an amazing job. Thanks for the chapters, I can hardly wait for mor. I’m super excited for the reveal of his next ability!!

This was one hell of a ride honestly. I stayed up till 4am just to finish the last few chapters in one stretch. The character growth was amazing, and while I feel like the very end was a little quick, it was amazing nonetheless. Though I have a point to make. Zabuza and Haku were totally forgotten about. They were absent the last 10-20 chapters and never mentioned again, kinda funny tho. All jokes aside, I heavily recommend this fic to anyone that enjoyes Naruto content. You won’t be disappointed. Trust.

She already knows he’s a seal master, his blatant use of the Hiraishin made sure of that. The Hiraishin jutsu is a sealing masterpiece that requires customization per user and intense studying and understanding of sealing to even think of using it. Not to mention some people are just more inclined to space-time jutsus than others.