Review Detail of sagorika_adhikari in Journey into the Dark Universe

The story is pretty well-knit, the characters were introduced appropriately while the author took his time to build the world. The plot is interesting to explore There are minor sentence structure mistakes, here and there otherwise it is a polished piece of work. P.S. Author San could you work on the synopsis a little more, it would get you more readers that way. So far, it is still good.[img=recommend]