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Review Detail of MrxGrey in MHA: The Mage

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MrxGrey
MrxGreyLv43yrMrxGrey

The premise is awesome and all but God,the relationship progression?it went from 0-100 real fast.like they've barely known each other for a day and boom the i love you came out of nowhere...like what?....and the mc is like giving off Pervy bakugou vibes...''hmmm...jiro looked good, I just ''might" consider "adding"her to my harem.........I mean no offence ,your creativity is good but ...uuh relationship -wise?slow down a little....yeah?

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MHA: The Mage

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MrxGrey
MrxGreyLv4MrxGrey

edit...didn't see the weeks part...sorry but I stand by what I said...slow down bruh..

WeslenBR
WeslenBRLv3WeslenBR

indeed

eclairsshi
eclairsshiLv4eclairsshi

Yeah, i just re read this and remember why i dropped in the first time. The harem is destroying the awesome concept. I mean, if the premise is for the supposed "romance" then go for it. But the title says "mage in MHA" so my impression is the mage part.

KumenEX
KumenEXLv14KumenEX

If he actually said that then I'm glad a left early before it ruined this good concept of a story.