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    MrxGrey3yr
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    telekinesis...slowly developed to molecular and atomic level...and vibrating the molecules at different speeds causing fire , lightning...the works.

    Ch 59 Is there anybody out there??
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    MrxGrey3yr
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    also develop the relationships slowly, if your planning to go to other worlds,don't label the relationship , just accept that they have feelings for each other and are going through the 'realization phase'?? so that would be an optimal time for world traveling, you can choose to take the girl with you for relationship progression or you can leave the girl and not feel guilty for leaving her because you are not sure of your feelings....? ...

    Ch 33 Chapter 33 Great Power, Great Responsibility
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    MrxGrey3yr
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    As for the Mt.Lady situation, I mean it's your story, you are the author so it's your decision.honestly the *** friend idea isn't that bad , but I don't think the personality of the MC could mesh well with it but if you are confident you can do it, you should.i have seen the friends with benefits plot inside some stories and some did good , while others just went from 0-100 real fast, like went from strangers to 'I love you'in the span of 10 seconds which is a big no-no.but please do keep mind that even if it's a friends with benefits kind of deal, some feelings may catch on for noth parties, also by chance if you choose to end it don't put the woman in a relationship with another person immediately after the breakup...pls. but again your story...im just suggesting.

    Ch 33 Chapter 33 Great Power, Great Responsibility
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    MrxGrey3yr
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    i haven't seen much Mt.Lady pairings,maybe you could?or maybe ryuko?

    Ch 24 Chapter 24 USJ Invasion 1
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    MrxGrey3yr
    Commented

    aah yes....cory chase, the immortal monarch of shadows..............

    Ch 2 2) TWILIGHT!!!!.......
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    MrxGrey3yr
    Replied to ahmed_waleed_1200

    thanks..

    Ch 5 This is War...Part I
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    MrxGrey3yr
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    ..great story..just go easy on the caps..pls

    Ch 7 SHARINGAN
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    MrxGrey3yr
    Replied to hatsu_miku

    ...not dead....

    Ch 4 not dropping
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    MrxGrey3yr
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    authors shameless self review here.... y'know how it goes...blah blah blah blah blahblablahblah blah..blah blah..blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah..blaah..blah...

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    MrxGrey3yr
    Replied to MrxGrey

    edit...didn't see the weeks part...sorry but I stand by what I said...slow down bruh..

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    MrxGrey3yr
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    The premise is awesome and all but God,the relationship progression?it went from 0-100 real fast.like they've barely known each other for a day and boom the i love you came out of nowhere...like what?....and the mc is like giving off Pervy bakugou vibes...''hmmm...jiro looked good, I just ''might" consider "adding"her to my harem.........I mean no offence ,your creativity is good but ...uuh relationship -wise?slow down a little....yeah?

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    MrxGrey3yr
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    With all this big sister going around,is this going to turn into a wuxia novel?...

    Ch 26 26. Fuinjutsu Training
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    MrxGrey3yr
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    I'm not trying to justify the authors decision or anything but I think what he's trying to convey is that both Reima and Citi would have liked to start a relationship with Quelaag ..and the others,with how they're relationship with Fleur ended,they were scared to take the first step? With Quelaag pushing both of them into it,the decision was taken away from they're hands and hence they chose to go along with it. I propose a chapter detailing reimas pov on this?

    Ch 732 Comes to a head
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  • MrxGrey
    MrxGrey3yr
    Replied to hatsu_miku

    Like I said gearing up for a mass release...maybe I'll release the chapters I've already written..non-edited ?

    Ch 4 not dropping
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    MrxGrey3yr
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    I don't mind the mc experimenting...what I do have a problem is the lack of attachment that he has to his bed buddy...it's a little off putting....lorelai isn't a one night stand....and it is natural to have an attachment after years of being together as friends with benefits..but ....he doesn't care for it....that's all I'm saying.....

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    MrxGrey3yr
    Replied to Slammeron01

    Thank you....

    Ch 1 Prologue:
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    MrxGrey3yr
    Replied to Darkstar11051999

    Would be too op....with the console already thanos shows up,mc could probably just select and kill,bye bye thanos...I need plot people.....

    Ch 3 Experimenting....Again...!!!
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    MrxGrey3yr
    Replied to Darkstar11051999

    yes....yes I am.......

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    MrxGrey3yr
    Replied to racecarsthegodcar

    While console commands are op,I don't want to make him too op,that's why I made the help command ineffective....mostly I'm thinking the ending to be something like thanos showing up with an infinity gauntlet and mc be like you have an infinity gauntlet?I have an infinity gauntlet.you know what?everybody gets an infinity gauntlet......jk

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