The story is great so far and I love it. I don’t remember any errors or anything of the sort. I also haven’t found any inconsistencies like a lot of stories on this site. Keep up the great story author-san
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LIKENo i’m not a bot and if you’ve read what i wrote correctly you would’ve found out i wrote: “i don’t remember”. You expect me to remember every single grammar error? What are we readers? Spell checks? No we read for the story and this story even if you can maybe find some errors it’s clearly not major.
the spelling mistakes are inconsequential, what about the dead character that came back to life, the mismatch of information about the war. the whole store is full of incorrect information the story itself says. it will say something then a few chapters later change it.
TheSleepingCow:No i’m not a bot and if you’ve read what i wrote correctly you would’ve found out i wrote: “i don’t remember”. You expect me to remember every single grammar error? What are we readers? Spell checks? No we read for the story and this story even if you can maybe find some errors it’s clearly not major.