Review Detail of _Bartimaeus_ in The System: Civilian Shinobi

It's an interesting and engaging read, but only until chapter 74, where the protagonist of this fan fiction is nerfed into the dust. Since chapter 76 (et seqq.) he is suffering from a very pesky disease of foolish behavior and stupidness. It makes you feel miserable as previously you started to relate with this novel's main cast as a snarky and smart individual with a rakish appearance stemming from a civilian household maneuvering the pitfalls of shinobi-hood. Though that is all in the past, what remains is a drone doing every one else's work with absolutely no personality. not recommend to read this, utter waste of time. Good example of what not to do when writing (fan) fiction. (TLDR) Mc has strong abilities but wields them horribly because the author nerfed his ability to sensibly reason or think. Sadly the protagonist isn't the only one suffering from this.