Review Detail of JcPancakes in Conquest Carnival: Two Worlds Collide

Writing Quality: I have nothing to even complain about. Fantastic grammar, little if not zero mistakes. Vivid use of a myriad of words, terms and expressions. The phrases are managed in bite sizes, allowing for breathing room between reads. (Many authors fall for long and winding description or conversations without a break, myself included). Truly a joy to read. Stability of Updates: Since the story is fairly new, I hope the updates will be consistent because I can't wait to read more. Story Development: I would say the pacing is fine with the MC daily life and interactions but I think there should a hook for the audience, something to hint on the big picture. (I know it's in the synopsis but I would love to have some kind of foreshadowing) Character Design: Oh boy. From small interactions, monologues, actions and description, the characters are already in my head. I also love the Spanish incorporated in the conversations, it gives flavour to it. (Yay to Spanish lessons and thank god for the translations) World Background: It's quite a description on the world background. However, there are some strange parts about knowledge becoming so advanced yet reality is so primitive. Upon reading further, I could guess something happened that resets everything (except knowledge) back to the modern era (probably a war, a disaster) that is connected to the game.