For a tale that most readers and writers alike have heard, this was presented in a different light— with an equally different style. Our author has decided to descend down those *censored*, crystal steps from heaven and participate in a... strange situation? Fairy Go— uhhh Boss, are you part of the mafia?... Ahem, other than the weird dialogue from earlier, this is my advice to you. I do recommend maybe cutting out some of the author and Cinderella’s conversations like the recap/ rewind since it does break off the flow of the story for me; however, I still do feel like it, to a certain degree, makes the story a unique case in itself. This is a decision you should think about as others such as myself may find this slightly weird. However, other than this, I find it a bemusing twist of a tale and hope you continue to keep up the hard work, Author !
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