So I read up to chapter 6 and the story is good. It has the same speed as my own novel. Overall It's great, just a little more polishing is required nothing too big. The characters are likable I had few questions about the motivations of a certain character, so I wrote a comment for that. I think you will do great just don't give up on writing like others. I support your novel and added it to my collection. So keep up the good work.
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