so I'm just here for the EXP but decided to write an actual review hmmm i think the novel is a bit slow and everything feels dragged like the MC doesn't need to have a 2 chapter internal monologue about if he should take a shit or not the fight scene are really good especially against bosses i love the realism factor of how some characters can just ruthlessly die but i think you should tone down a bit on killing cuz it leaves me with a sense of insecurity that even the MCs friends(carlos and any future friends/love) and his sister may very well die but i still love it my only complaints is that the story progression is slow perhaps longer chapters will slove the problem and that we don't know much about the outside world aside from that there's fortresses blessings and they're in a different planet i hope there's more outside world scenes
Zhanye
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Zhanye:Thank you for the review, but reviews dont give exp anymore xD
The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.
Zhanye:Thank you for the review, but reviews dont give exp anymore xD
The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.
Gabriel_Leite_4609:The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.