Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

Keep writing! It's really interesting and engaging, but it's different from conventional twilight fan fiction, so read it with an open mind. I'm really enjoying it.

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It was a typo, I'll fix it, ty!

It was a typo, I'll fix it, ty!

no harem

No harem

Ty!

Tyvm!

I'm his brother, don't worry I'll make him write this novel again, even if it takes a while for him to get better, he won't run away from finishing it

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Ok, this is becoming boring for me, 6 chapters and nothing relevant happen. The novel started with a interesting Tycoon development plot, but now is just a boring slice of life. If it keeps this way for the next chapters, probably it will be my time to drop this.

Well, let's go. So far, the protagonist has proved to be very consistent, very different from the cliché of a protagonist that many authors on this site are doing. His system doesn't make the protagonist OP to the point where no one can fight him, but it still makes him very strong, which is good. The background world currently seems to have a lot of consistency, because of what it was presented and how everything is unfolding, even showing some differences from our current world to the novel world in a discreet way that doesn't interrupt the reading. In the end, you didn't let me down with these chapters, and I believe that with you posting chapters every day you won't let me down in the future.

Honestly, a good novel for me, I saw a few bad comments that almost made me don't read it, but as all I saw is a really good novel 140 140 140 140 140 140 140

I've read all the 33 chapters today, honestly, a very good read. For someone that is used to read mtl novels, read this one is very easy. The story is good, some things could be better, but nothing that could make me give less than 5 Stars to this good work.

Thank you for the chapter