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2023-09-18 07:53

I recently started to read this story and I find it really interesting , it's a good story with quite good development but to be honest the grammar is kinda killing me and it's making it even more difficult to understand the plot because of the multiple errors that I see in every 2 to 3 sentences. But still, despite that, I think the story is really intriguing, and I will still keep reading it as i know that enhlish is not everyones first language (not mine either)!!! I read in another review that the wording and grammar becomes better as the Arthur go's, and I can't wait to see that ! overall, I recommend anyone to give this interesting read it a try 😉

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