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wintermist1994
wintermist1994Author3yr
2020-12-02 11:06

stop saying hurtfull thing to my novel and give a real critics that could make me grow. here! I give the low rating you guys want! if you want to insult anything just comment here! i will take all your insult! i am still a noob. but i hope you guys could be more understanding, i rather if you guys comment like daremyname that give low rating but with a reason so i could processing what i should do in the future. stop with shitty shit low IQ else. i give you guys a place here to insult me the author directly. i never bother if you guys give low rating, but a hurtful thing is still hurt for me as an author. I just want to cure my-self and have some meaning in my life, i know how trashy my novel is so i don't need your insult to remind me, what i need now is critic and advice that could make me a better writer. I just want to ignite my passion with this novel....

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GodharemZ
GodharemZLv13

I haven't seen toxicty yet in the reviews they are mostly criticism for spelling and rateing and suggestions. I think it's okay only thing that annoys me is the mc I wish he was more cold and calculating more. Otherwise nice job 👌

wintermist1994
wintermist1994Author

because i erased them all. i didn't want to keep it littering in the reviews , their review is just pure dislike, why should i keep them. i put this 1 star review if in the future people write pure dislike without giving me anything i will copy it here, their nick name and the content of their pure insult review

GodharemZ:I haven't seen toxicty yet in the reviews they are mostly criticism for spelling and rateing and suggestions. I think it's okay only thing that annoys me is the mc I wish he was more cold and calculating more. Otherwise nice job 👌
wintermist1994
wintermist1994Author

jinxz2015 * Worst Shitty Novel i've read. Worst Shitty Novel i've read. Worst Shitty Novel i've read. Worst Shitty Novel i've read. ITS BETTER NOT TO INVEST IN THIS NOVEL GUYS. DONT WASTE YOUR RESOURCES HERE. I GUARANTEE THAT THIS NOVEL WILL BE DROP BY THE AUTHOR! 100% SURENESS.

wintermist1994
wintermist1994Author

Illack LOL It's a really shitty novel, a main character like a 15-year-old kid who lusts to older women who think of using a penis, has no will to move forward and develop a really disappointing novel

wintermist1994
wintermist1994Author

Revelation_ This novel so bad that it is bad pls Add me to the replies pls wordcount wordcount word count wordcount wordcount wordcount wordcount wordcount Author note: this one not insulting or anything, but he not read my novel and giving 1 star to get exp. lets call this guy exp seeker! and apparently he ask me to put his 1 star review here... somehow, i feel there is a lot of weird thing in this world...

Yuna_sama
Yuna_samaLv5

The fact that you’re reposting they’re reviews Ill give a 5 star review

wintermist1994:because i erased them all. i didn't want to keep it littering in the reviews , their review is just pure dislike, why should i keep them. i put this 1 star review if in the future people write pure dislike without giving me anything i will copy it here, their nick name and the content of their pure insult review
wintermist1994
wintermist1994Author

is not that i hate them pouring insult to my novel, as i know its impossible to make everyone love your thing, but somehow, when i read their insult in the review it would damped my mood to continue writing, and i choose to create this review so the future reader know that all in the review there is someone that dislike my novel. and tell them this novel is not perfect, heck is reaaalyyyy far from perfect. thank you for your review, i appreciated it

Yuna_sama:The fact that you’re reposting they’re reviews Ill give a 5 star review
WN_grdy_mthr_fker
WN_grdy_mthr_fkerLv11

lol i haven't read the novel but i will read it .. now and insult you if needed for wasting my time like these guys said it would ...😂

wintermist1994:is not that i hate them pouring insult to my novel, as i know its impossible to make everyone love your thing, but somehow, when i read their insult in the review it would damped my mood to continue writing, and i choose to create this review so the future reader know that all in the review there is someone that dislike my novel. and tell them this novel is not perfect, heck is reaaalyyyy far from perfect. thank you for your review, i appreciated it
wintermist1994
wintermist1994Author

if you want to just insult me, Insult me here bro, it will made my work lesser after all lol. and if you wana give 1 star with little bit of effort of critics and advice, you can do it in the review, i got no problem with it.

WN_grdy_mthr_fker:lol i haven't read the novel but i will read it .. now and insult you if needed for wasting my time like these guys said it would ...😂
AntNumber4825
AntNumber4825Lv15

After reading all of these comments i feel i need to read thd book. if i have thoughts i want to make do you want me to make a review each time or do you like comments on the chapters as they come out

wintermist1994
wintermist1994Author

comment will do, if you want to give review and critics after reading and have some impression of it, please do write it in the review, i don't mind it even if you gave me 1 star, just give minimal effort of your thought in my novel, so I can write better on the next novel I'll write in the future, thanks bro

AntNumber4825:After reading all of these comments i feel i need to read thd book. if i have thoughts i want to make do you want me to make a review each time or do you like comments on the chapters as they come out
wintermist1994
wintermist1994Author

i'm sorry if i'm not replying sooner, later, ima kinda bussy write pile up chapter, furthermore, I need to draw Alex and Chaliope design after it, so from now on I rarely checked the comment XD

AntNumber4825:After reading all of these comments i feel i need to read thd book. if i have thoughts i want to make do you want me to make a review each time or do you like comments on the chapters as they come out
AntNumber4825
AntNumber4825Lv15

I would be glad if incould help you improve, one of the things i like the most about this site even with all its faults is being able to speak with the author in real time with them writing the story and seeing some of your ideas being put into practice. I have tried writing before and I’m not too good at creating a story, but i love to give any help i can to people who do write.

wintermist1994:comment will do, if you want to give review and critics after reading and have some impression of it, please do write it in the review, i don't mind it even if you gave me 1 star, just give minimal effort of your thought in my novel, so I can write better on the next novel I'll write in the future, thanks bro
Dragon150
Dragon150Lv5

Mr.Auther I mostly don't leave a review on average or a badly written novel. I only leave reviews on those that I like but. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE it's important use "AUDIO MODE" chapter 1-20 after listening can you respond to me what is your own review

Dragon150
Dragon150Lv5

plot is good I like the Cheat that is given to MC But most of the time I use AUDIO MODE and listening to it is unbearable

wintermist1994
wintermist1994Author

audio mode? what is that? sorry I'm new here...

Dragon150:Mr.Auther I mostly don't leave a review on average or a badly written novel. I only leave reviews on those that I like but. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE it's important use "AUDIO MODE" chapter 1-20 after listening can you respond to me what is your own review
wintermist1994
wintermist1994Author

bro, i'm sorry i try to find audio mode but can't find it out, and I'm aware of the starting chapter grammar and writing quality kinda suck, I alr' fix it to be acceptable before, but i can't fix it all the time since I have to write the latest chapter, and now, I try to make illustration for my character too... so I just want to say sorry. anyway, some people give me comment on some wrong grammar and I always fix it immediately. if there was still a lot of mistake, than, it's just my lackluster skill, I'm sorry

Dragon150:Mr.Auther I mostly don't leave a review on average or a badly written novel. I only leave reviews on those that I like but. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE it's important use "AUDIO MODE" chapter 1-20 after listening can you respond to me what is your own review
Dragon150
Dragon150Lv5

just tap on the chapter when you're reading then it will display General/Display at top of general side you can see content, night/day mod, audio and vote

wintermist1994:audio mode? what is that? sorry I'm new here...
wintermist1994
wintermist1994Author

thanks a lot bro, i didn;t know if ther's audio mode, maybe with this I could improve my wrting better when crosschecking it with audio mode. I appreaciated it alot. [img=recommend]

Dragon150:just tap on the chapter when you're reading then it will display General/Display at top of general side you can see content, night/day mod, audio and vote
wintermist1994
wintermist1994Author

anyway, is it from mobile apps? I used PC so when I checked i cant find it in my display setting... T.T

Dragon150:just tap on the chapter when you're reading then it will display General/Display at top of general side you can see content, night/day mod, audio and vote
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wintermist1994
wintermist1994Author

Author here~, i just want to remind you guys that this novel isnot complex novel and isnot really well written like mostly KR novel, the title speak it loud thats is almost look like JP novel (I tried to make the MC not too braindead but dont expect me too much since i am still beginner loll). so i hope to future reader to not bully this noob too much lolll. itsnot that i forbid you to rate this novel lowly thou, since i myself know it better that my novel isnot good enough(trash) to compare with some well written Chinese or KR novel but i hope you guys dont set your expectation bar too high and then get dissappointed later. idk for JP one, because mostly JP isekai novel i read is almost all with some breindead MC, but idk i really enjoy read it tho, you could tell that my taste isnot that good loll. and in the future this novel will go premium(since i already sign the contract, but idk when it will go premium), i hope you guys still supporting me since i am a NEET that lost in his way of life loll (in sort i am broke and poor loll), i dont expect to get alot of gift from you guys, but i hope at least you guys still continued open the chapter when its release and still continued read it if you guys have some free time, maybe you guys think that i have some low self esteem or something, after seeing me rating my own work lowly, i do have some pride of myself after all i already write this far(the really first time novel i write was ended being abndoned in ch 6 loll so i never consider it as my first novel), but i need to be realistic, since i know there is alot of better novel out there that worth your guys money in webnovel after all XD. and idk i after reading that my novel got contracted i have this strange feeling that i want to continued this novel until the end, i will be honest with you guys, i once dreamed to be manga artist but give up after realizing i draw too slow, and its taking too much burden to my body for having less sleep after drawing all day. i know that i really not suited to became pro, maybe i am weakwilled or something, but i choose to have longlife rather than achieving my dream. since then i always lost of myself and don't have confident and always doubt myself. i never doing something else with passion like before when i still dreamed to be manga artist. idk maybe i have no motivation anymore... but... i really want to finish this novel till the end, maybe i will used this chance as my own therapy since i have nothing to do at home anyway, and somehow i do really want to change myself... i have enough of being burden of my family, i am sorry if i unconsciously sharing this with you (some random stranger that dwelling the webnovel). i just hope you guys that still enjoying this novel continued to supporting me... thank you... . . . and in the future i have a plan to (idk if it will be done) draw some character design and continent or maybe a world map for this novel. i just didnt know where should i upload it? ill be honest i dont use social media often, i even almost never playing it i have instagram but i just upload my few artwork there so...(yeah i am a weirdo, and loner lol) maybe its better if i make new instagram to upload some drawing about this novel (i dont want to use my old insta since i dont want my family know that i write ero-ero novel lolll. anyway enjoy your day, and thak you for supporting me. -noob author-

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