Review Detail of Grenhaer in Thomas Prest: A Simple Magician
Review detail
before the release of the MCU it was very interesting... but then the author showed his dislike for the "heart" (girls) of the dxd world... and this ruined my whole fanfic experience as a dxd fan. I'd rather you write MCU fanfiction than an ugly dxd world with a disgusting crossover with a biased and bad opinion about the girls of the dxd world. Everyone who reads dxd fanfiction loves these girls... but seeing how you feel about them, I'm leaving. And it is necessary to write in the description that this is a crossover. It’s a pity that I didn’t like this fanfic, unlike the previous fanfic (fanfic about Naruto turned out to be very interesting)
Thomas Prest: A Simple Magician
KasiCair
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The best part about this comment? The DxD girls are pre-school age in the story right now and they do not and will not have any role in the story for a very long time to come. Yet, just because in an author note I said that they are not my favorite female characters, I am being flamed by people who in their head somehow translated it into: 'He hates them!' or something. Well, ok. If my world is ugly and disgusting to you, then that's fair.
bruh if they don't have role then why make crossover world ? just make simple MCU fanfiction or otherwise
KasiCair:The best part about this comment? The DxD girls are pre-school age in the story right now and they do not and will not have any role in the story for a very long time to come. Yet, just because in an author note I said that they are not my favorite female characters, I am being flamed by people who in their head somehow translated it into: 'He hates them!' or something. Well, ok. If my world is ugly and disgusting to you, then that's fair.
KasiCair:The best part about this comment? The DxD girls are pre-school age in the story right now and they do not and will not have any role in the story for a very long time to come. Yet, just because in an author note I said that they are not my favorite female characters, I am being flamed by people who in their head somehow translated it into: 'He hates them!' or something. Well, ok. If my world is ugly and disgusting to you, then that's fair.
No idea. As I said, they are pre-school age in the story right now. Any part where they are relevant will not happen for a long while and I didn't think much about it since I dunno if I will even continue the story up till that point. Being told I am disgusting just because I decided to write MCU and DxD crossover kinda got to me, tbh.
Ryofu:Will any of the main DxD women be part of the MC's Harem?
The insulte or things like that I don't understand, the fear about how to do it is there though. The main problem I see with fusing those two work is that Marvel is a "Universe" story with many existence outside earth and DxD is centered around "earth". Well, it's when reading the story that will be able to tell if you try to fuse all of the MCU or only part of it. Creating a crossover world doesn't mean taking 100% of each world xD.
KasiCair:No idea. As I said, they are pre-school age in the story right now. Any part where they are relevant will not happen for a long while and I didn't think much about it since I dunno if I will even continue the story up till that point. Being told I am disgusting just because I decided to write MCU and DxD crossover kinda got to me, tbh.
He stated the crossover is disgusting, not you. Apparently it’s disgusting because of your biased opinion and dislike towards the females in DxD
KasiCair:No idea. As I said, they are pre-school age in the story right now. Any part where they are relevant will not happen for a long while and I didn't think much about it since I dunno if I will even continue the story up till that point. Being told I am disgusting just because I decided to write MCU and DxD crossover kinda got to me, tbh.
Fi3l:He stated the crossover is disgusting, not you. Apparently it’s disgusting because of your biased opinion and dislike towards the females in DxD
KasiCair:The best part about this comment? The DxD girls are pre-school age in the story right now and they do not and will not have any role in the story for a very long time to come. Yet, just because in an author note I said that they are not my favorite female characters, I am being flamed by people who in their head somehow translated it into: 'He hates them!' or something. Well, ok. If my world is ugly and disgusting to you, then that's fair.
KasiCair:The best part about this comment? The DxD girls are pre-school age in the story right now and they do not and will not have any role in the story for a very long time to come. Yet, just because in an author note I said that they are not my favorite female characters, I am being flamed by people who in their head somehow translated it into: 'He hates them!' or something. Well, ok. If my world is ugly and disgusting to you, then that's fair.
KasiCair:No idea. As I said, they are pre-school age in the story right now. Any part where they are relevant will not happen for a long while and I didn't think much about it since I dunno if I will even continue the story up till that point. Being told I am disgusting just because I decided to write MCU and DxD crossover kinda got to me, tbh.
Don't mind these people the fanfics they love are 90%+ \|/ Catch them all... F**k them all... Be a beta MC and make them all f**k you... For me you nailed my favorite themes like underdog, alchemy, HP crossover. You also have a great style where your story is more of an original based on other works then fanfic. You have 50+ chapters of a fanfic where you didn't touch the main plot of any works that are in this crossover excluding the few characters and they are allready very different when most can't go past 20 ch while following the plot to the point that you are reading the original from different pov... I wish you good luck and i hope you can make it over 100ch and to the top 1 ff rankings.
KasiCair:No idea. As I said, they are pre-school age in the story right now. Any part where they are relevant will not happen for a long while and I didn't think much about it since I dunno if I will even continue the story up till that point. Being told I am disgusting just because I decided to write MCU and DxD crossover kinda got to me, tbh.
I havent read the story, only a few reviews and the comment section, but even I can tell this is ambitious. This isn't to say it's impossible to make this good. It will just be really difficult.
KasiCair:No idea. As I said, they are pre-school age in the story right now. Any part where they are relevant will not happen for a long while and I didn't think much about it since I dunno if I will even continue the story up till that point. Being told I am disgusting just because I decided to write MCU and DxD crossover kinda got to me, tbh.
KasiCair:The best part about this comment? The DxD girls are pre-school age in the story right now and they do not and will not have any role in the story for a very long time to come. Yet, just because in an author note I said that they are not my favorite female characters, I am being flamed by people who in their head somehow translated it into: 'He hates them!' or something. Well, ok. If my world is ugly and disgusting to you, then that's fair.
Just ignore the birds, a lion doesn’t concern himself with the opinions of a sheep. Do you, it’s your story. Those who want to read it will, and those who don’t want to read it, won’t. As I tell my brothers, “there’s plenty of fish in the sea.” In this situation, the fish are readers. I’ve seen authors quit stories because they couldn’t stand reviews. You are the author, the creator, and the god of your story. Write it how you want, if they don’t like it, they can go write their own. Period.
KasiCair:If you are hinting at the new addition to the synopsis, that was not aimed at this review.
Soldier_of_GOD:Just ignore the birds, a lion doesn’t concern himself with the opinions of a sheep. Do you, it’s your story. Those who want to read it will, and those who don’t want to read it, won’t. As I tell my brothers, “there’s plenty of fish in the sea.” In this situation, the fish are readers. I’ve seen authors quit stories because they couldn’t stand reviews. You are the author, the creator, and the god of your story. Write it how you want, if they don’t like it, they can go write their own. Period.
