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BIGO_NIGOLv44yr
2021-02-10 01:55

I have to say that this is one of the best fanfictions i have ever read. The way tou handle the characters to fit your own story with your own oc's is very good. however. One thing that kind of makes this a 8/10 instead of a 10/10 for me is how you constantly change how much Alyx can do with his powers. In one chapter he can go into infinite mode gear 4 full charge and demon mode at once and use it vut in other chapters he can bearly use gear 4 just after using gear 3 for a little while. I would easily give this story a 10/10 but you have to keep the MC's powers consistant otherwise it will seem like that you nerf Alyx for one fight then buff him in the next fight only to then nerf him again in his nex fight. Dont get m wrong however, I very much love this story but you can make it that much better by just changing one little thing

(OLD) My Hero Academia: The Overdrive Hero!

LeoLyonWriting
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LeoLyonWriting
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Yee, I've been working on that steadily. I've been establishing his strength and hinting at his maximum power. I'm working out a final resolution to the output of his Quirk, the only thing that will strain him from now on is Gear Six & Infinite Mode. I'll also be implementing the Full Quirk Control Leonidus here soon (Where he used his Overdrive Quirk, Rage Quirk, and Demon Form all at once).

4yr
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LeoLyonWriting
LeoLyonWritingAuthor

I think I could most definitely go through and change some stuff. I'm fairly certain I know what chapters you're talking about, but I'll read through everything regardless

4yr
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Grass_Cutter
Grass_CutterLv4

So far its amazing and is quite frankly one of the best mha fanfics ive read not anything really to improve apon but i just hope with all my heart to do not drop This fanfic.

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BobBuild25
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this is my curreny rev for the work. waiting for future chages!waiting for future chages!waiting for future chages!waiting for future chages!

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YoucanCallmeVENTILv3

Not a good story its like summary of the entire anime arcs with mc nerfed as fudge while pulling out random powers out of nothing.. ... Mmmm

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White_cat_chelo
White_cat_cheloLv3

My first problem is that it seems strange to me that he will forget such important things in society, why is it not a complete memory loss in which he does not remember anything at all then how can he forget that it is a peculiarity is as if he forgot that he has eyes as if forgetting to breathe. Another thing is that the sister had told him that the peculiarity develops with the body so what happened did he lose his muscles, his muscle mass or he never train that really makes no sense to forget that his society is full of heroes

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LeoLyonWriting
LeoLyonWritingAuthor

Reveal spoiler

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VastoHeaven
VastoHeavenLv12

Well, am here again ✌ Hope that your reboot goes well👍 123465816381491946197294729472956194068261527494729572057294728387483937374929583037493739458

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TheFoolishHuman
TheFoolishHumanLv2

I swear this is litterly the best MHA Fanfic I've read so far. You know what inspired me to write my on Fanfiction was this story. I love the character designs especially Black-Heart. Thank you author-san!

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GabbyTheKindSeraph
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It's a good work of yours mate! Keep it up! One of the best MHA fanfics that I read for a while! Please never drop your work! Over and Out!

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TheYesFan
TheYesFanLv1

Oh. My. Goodness!! This fanfic feels so underrated! I'm a sap for bnha and this really really is amazing! I have been reading this all day and im in absolute love with it. The way you nail the characters personalities and put your own thing on them is awesome! this definitely needs more attention!

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