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2021-01-28 04:36

Not a good story its like summary of the entire anime arcs with mc nerfed as fudge while pulling out random powers out of nothing.. ... Mmmm

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Trust me, I've gotten an entire thing explained about his Quirk. Most of the abilities (Telepathy to be exact) is probably the one ability that's rarely used in the story. Plus, if I made his Quirk OP right off the bat, the story wouldn't be interesting whatsoever. Flight and Healing are the two abilities that make the most sense being that his Overdrive aura allows him to fly, outside of Modes 1-5 he can't fly at all. Healing is done simply because of the restorative properties of his Quirk. By that I mean since his body is constantly having to work itself alongside with his fast paced Quirk, it grants him somewhat of "regeneration" that keeps him from overworking himself. This "regeneration" isn't cellular regeneration where he can heal his injuries, it only keeps him from overworking himself (i.e. His arms and legs lockup when he does overwork himself/overuse his Quirk). By using his Overdrive, he can heal others at the cost of his own stamina

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Also, I kind of didn't want to just throw him to the wolves by dropping a completely custom arc that would completely avoid the entire story. I figured that would be boring as well, so I decided to go with the much better route and have him in the very start of the My Hero Academia series

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No problem thanks for the explanation again.. ....... And sorry for the trouble

LeoLyonWriting:Trust me, I've gotten an entire thing explained about his Quirk. Most of the abilities (Telepathy to be exact) is probably the one ability that's rarely used in the story. Plus, if I made his Quirk OP right off the bat, the story wouldn't be interesting whatsoever. Flight and Healing are the two abilities that make the most sense being that his Overdrive aura allows him to fly, outside of Modes 1-5 he can't fly at all. Healing is done simply because of the restorative properties of his Quirk. By that I mean since his body is constantly having to work itself alongside with his fast paced Quirk, it grants him somewhat of "regeneration" that keeps him from overworking himself. This "regeneration" isn't cellular regeneration where he can heal his injuries, it only keeps him from overworking himself (i.e. His arms and legs lockup when he does overwork himself/overuse his Quirk). By using his Overdrive, he can heal others at the cost of his own stamina
LeoLyonWriting
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It's fine! I honestly need to put an explanation out somewhere lol

YoucanCallmeVENTI:No problem thanks for the explanation again.. ....... And sorry for the trouble
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