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RedeyesinfernoLv134yr
2020-10-16 04:35

I know that I already read this in space battles, but I just want to clarify how awesome this story was. I really just enjoy good quality Fanfics. Plus it has amazing grammar. It's really depressing how many stories have such horrible grammar.

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You can't imagine how annoying it may be to just sit down and sort through the grammatical section of the story to make it readable. This is a rare gem to find and I pray that authors such as this surface little bit more often. Cheers 🤘

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It's a really good story where the OC/SI MC really is the MC AND really is a Jedi... Normally stories about Jedi and Sith are pretty simular, massive reforms, kingdom building space mage badassness and no real personal plot or development that doesnt come down to the same subconscious conclusion of some kid writing out his wet dream star wars story... This story instead, is more like something you would expect from a professional author in it's composition and story telling. The mc isn't some op reincarnated space baby genius that can make all force users combined look like a single tiny bug being crushed under the full force of a primordial entity before his forst birthday. He isnt some genius fighter that makes asian martial arts movie contrasts look tame by comparison. He acts and feels like a real ***** person who experienced his fair share of life, both good and bad, and finds himself transmigrated in a body and age at the point in time that destiny, the force or just a good story needs him to be. If your a teenager, this guy is like your father figure in his regular and better moments. If youre an ***** like me, hes like that friend you have who seems so much more grounded in reality than yourself and makes the best of things... The story is one worth reading. All I can say is that I would have liked for the original author to have posted it here or somewhere else I frequent so I could tell him myself... Thank you for a fantastic and insightful read. It has been a long time since a fanfic actually has me thinking about my perspective in and on life.

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