Okay I am legit loving this story so far. Added it to my library. First of all, the synopsis wasn't that eye catching imo but as soon as I turned the first page, just the first line alone was enough to captivate me. This story has tremendous potential. Good descriptions, good development and good world background. I however found a small issue with the grammar. At first I wasn't going to mark you down for it because it was minor, but I kept seeing the same mistakes reoccurring further down the chapters. Like; capitalization and the incorrect tense being used in dialogue. 4.8 from me, just fix those small issues and you're good to go. Keep at it author and don't give up, this book has a lot of potential!
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