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Syntrx
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2021-03-23 04:49

Don't be fooled by the high rating, it's because the author can review his own novel and give it 5 stars any number of times. The novel is just another crappy fanfic, with the MC basically jerking off to FY, and not doing anything interesting. The grammar is tolerable, which isn't saying a lot. The author's exposition is telling us what we already know, instead of adding anything new to the table. And the author's take on FY is awful. TLDR: Don't read it if you're expecting a decent fanfiction.

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Alpha_Venerable
Alpha_VenerableAuthor

Sorry for the disappointment. I just started it for fun and hoped to provide people an additional perspective. Nevermind the fact that I felt the story would be super interesting at that point so I wrote it. Haha it's embarrassing to admit but I did some childish things to improve the rating. it was actually to motivate myself to write back then. I will be coming up with some side stories. do let me know if they are good

Silencer5EMR3
Silencer5EMR3Lv10

Yeah this is not a good novel for fanfic. In fanfic, usually mc will have a tremendous cheat, and making reader more hard to breathe in satisfaction. Not for another round in reading for another point of view. But the author obviously the diehard fan of RI, the plot is well thought. But like people said " with gretest hope come with hard disappointment "

TheProphet_
TheProphet_Lv13

Good luck man!

Alpha_Venerable:Sorry for the disappointment. I just started it for fun and hoped to provide people an additional perspective. Nevermind the fact that I felt the story would be super interesting at that point so I wrote it. Haha it's embarrassing to admit but I did some childish things to improve the rating. it was actually to motivate myself to write back then. I will be coming up with some side stories. do let me know if they are good
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