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Kirito_Link
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2022-06-21 22:52

Author you should really pay attention to your English, sometimes a sentence starts with "a..." instead of "A...". Just for adding words : Les séries d'animations japonaises et américaines ont tendance à nous influencer sur les I de la Concorde apt 11 et de la mise en place de la Concorde apt 11 is a great place to live and enjoy the fun and relaxing fun and relaxing fun and relaxing and relaxing and relaxing as a relaxing time for your family and friends with you and your family and friends with you and your family and friends with you

Reborn with perfect instant mastery skill

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Ophelia_
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The grammar its so bad that my eyes are bleeding...... . .. . . . . .. . . . . . ........................................................................................

2yr

F_150
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Sokanas
SokanasLv13

Author name accurate. Grammar so bad it killed the clan.

2yr
AssClappicus
AssClappicusLv14

overall good buy please download grammarly or something. ##++#+##+#+(#£((£(*(*(*(*(*(#(*(*(#(£(#8#828(£(£8£8£(2(£(£8£8282(£(£(£(£88£8£(£+_;3;38#(

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WeedsNsht
WeedsNshtLv4

The plot of the story is interesting and mc's ability is great, the grammar of the story should certainly be improved upon and also the wording of the sentence can also be improved because some words had other meaning but still used in the story and it makes it misleading when trying to understand the story. Still good tho

2yr
krishna0512
krishna0512Lv4

Story concept is very interesting and it feels like you can create a decent story out of instant mastery technique. BUT, the grammar is absolute trash. its worse than some of the translation fics that I read.

2yr
Htun_Linn_Ko
Htun_Linn_KoLv14

Dude u need To Pair kushina With mC Dude u need To Pair kushina With mC Dude u need To Pair kushina With mC Dude u need To Pair kushina With mC

2yr
UndeadBeing
UndeadBeingLv12

The getting lost was funny, then he became superman... He pulled a kamehameha and I couldn't after that, I feel like if i read more I'll die of cringe. The fact he yelled kamehameha also played a part, but yeah I read alot of qidian novels so the grammar wasn't bad for me, character kind of becomes kage level in 4 chapters, fixes his getting lost in 3, and forced teuchi to do things so he can master them in 2. The grammar horrible, writing is 1, story development is 1 since he's basically ginna be hokage level in 10 chapters at most, character design is 2 since he makes me cringe enough to overlook any of the good parts. Mc barely knows how to get home much less the situation about the world, and he didn't even watch naruto so we get nothing. Reminder that this is only in the 4 chapters I could bear to read. stability is always a 3 unless the story is great enough

2yr
The_Zen_Boy
The_Zen_BoyLv4

good until now , there are some wrong sentences here and there but all in all readable [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

2yr
SLIKOH
SLIKOHLv1

Reveal spoiler

3yr
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