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    Kirito_Link18 hours ago
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    Why is the MC distracted when he has Observation Haki? He can literally look at multiple places at the same time...

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    Kirito_Linka day ago
    Replied to Wachdog

    Small ordinary items are fine but what about these busted superpowers? They're definitely worth much more...

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    Kirito_Link5 days ago
    Replied to DaoistW40miC

    About the quirk of the MC, Haki in itself would probably be considered as one singular quirk. However other people from the MHA verse might think that he has multiple quirks due to the variety of his powers.

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    Kirito_Link5 days ago
    Commented

    The only kinds of people who had multiple quirks canonically are AFO and some users of OFA that had a quirk before receiving it. Then there are those received quirks from AFO.

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    Kirito_Link5 days ago
    Commented

    Author quirks like Shoto's are considered as a single quirk, his is an hybrid one that combines the power of ice and fire, so it makes an advanced version of temperature control. Also is Haki visible in this fanfiction? Because Haki is supposed to be invisible in the One Piece-verse, it's only animation and design that gave it a representation.

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    Kirito_Link10 days ago
    Replied to Professor_Light

    Here are a few counter arguments: 1. Those were other fanfictions based ideas, nothing official. 2. Are tailed beasts interested enough into learning jutsus, and if yes why have they never used them outside of their (somewhat) unique techniques. 3. The ones present are clones and may not have the full memories and experience of originals.

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    Kirito_Link11 days ago
    Replied to Professor_Light

    Kurama does not have fuinjutsu, the reason Naruto was good at it was because of the Uzumaki bloodline, plus his father was also very talented in it.

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    Kirito_Link12 days ago
    Commented

    Author the 8 tails does not originate from the Land of Lightning... It was once said that Hashirama captured 8 tailed beasts and distributed them to other countries. So here are the tailed beasts powers: 1. Has sand control. 2. Fire release. 3. Water release and able to spin like Sonic, it also has spikes. 4. Has fire and earth chakra nature giving it the lava release. 5. Has steam based powers. 6. Has saliva-like (probably boiling release) and bubble powers. 7. Can fly, use insect based techniques, can also use a cocoon to slow down ninjutsus. 8. Ink release, can do various things with it like clones... 9. Has various sensing powers and may have wind and fire release. This is all of the tailed beasts exclusive powers by the number of their tails.

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    Kirito_Link14 days ago
    Commented

    Hey author two details I wanted you to notice. 1. The most important, this fanfiction contains NSFW stuff however it does not have any 18+ rated tags. Which is a rather important thing, kids could just be interested in your story and stumble in stuff that is not safe for them. There is not a single warning about it in the resume page, just a harem tag but that's it. Also, it would be great if 18+ rated contents could be made as their own chapters. It would be easier for those who just want to read the 'normal' part of the story. 2. Very simple and short. The move you wrote as 'extremespeed' is actually spaced so it's 'extreme speed'.