LiquorSquadLv54yr

2020-11-07 08:29

Story summary: 2 universes clash, The Star Federation (Super advance technology setting) and the Great Divine Universe (Magic setting for what i can tell) go to war with eachother for the rare super energy resource "Kryptonite". After less than a century of war, a third party of super insects with absurd strength appears to wage war with both sides, the Federation and the Great Divine then join forces to keep the insects at bay for an absurd amound of time. David transmigrates into the body of another boy named David, son of "Statesman" (a war veteran with a lot of political power for some reason) with a complicated family history, Becouse of pride and hubris the original David tried to perform a magic ritual to gain strength and gain independence but it backfired and kill him allowing the other David to take over, but the ritual wasn't a complete failure, the new David now has a "Shadow Servant" that obeys his commands (think of a "Stand" from JoJo's Bizzare Adventure) with the abilities of being invisible, sharring his vision and detecting danger, but most importantly, it can gain the knowledge and some power from the nearby souls he feeds itself with. After coming into terms with his situation he finds out that the events leading to the dead of the previous David were actually a careful plan to get him out of the picture Why? GO READ IT AND FIND OUT! The story "Summary" is long enough already! As for characters, David comes out a bit too childish at times and it feels a bit forced, besides that its the standard "Kids wins the super power lottery" kind of story but he's not annoying in any way besides his innexplicable affection towards his new family. All other characters are also fine and so far the intrige is well constructed, besides the aparent TEN THOUSANDS OF YEARS of technological stagnation i have no problems with the setting, its servisable.

Extraordinary David

Sunflower seeds eating crowd

4.8

60 Chs