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CanYouMakeItClear
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(My Honest Review😁) The MC starts off slow and his progress in Magic is minimal, But, now that I think of it, I enjoyed it. The process of the MC's, little by little improvement, until he gets stronger, is a slow and enjoyable ride. It's like when you ride a Ferris Wheel and peek outside, seeing a great view, slowly and surely unfold on your eyes. It may be because of me being Fan of a slow start, not like most of the Novels here in WN, being fast-paced and OP. (A quick summary without leaking any major spoilers) Earth is not exactly the "Earth" we know, but an Earth with a slight tweak with some new species and special people. 85 BC Earth, so yeah. Let's start with the World Building… I'm speechless. Start with Earth, and he, the MC miraculously gets transported to a place where People would learn Magic. Emery is a Human, but not really, as his Mother being *spoiler*. The Kingdom is an enemy to Emery's mother Kind and when they know his secret, they chase him, getting his Father killed, and him miraculously escaping the chase, and miraculously got transported to Magus Academy. Magus Academy is a place or Holy Land of some sort for Mages. Emery is a rare Human who had 4 Elements for him to choose from, but his talent being B, the worst talent in his class. He needs to pass the test or his memory might be erased and be transported back to Earth, but getting back means Death for him. (Summary Ends) The thing I like about this Novel is the World Building or the description the author is putting for us to see. 5 stars World Building. I see that most of the readers didn't like how slow-paced the story is, but for me, it is perfect. 5 stars Story Development.  Writing Quality is 4.8 stars, because of some typos, but it will not affect your reading Tbh.  Update? Waiting… as there are some personal problems the Editor is facing, so the Author can't publish the Chapter. 4.5 stars...🙃 Character Design is 4.8. The People are flesh out fine, and you can clearly feel the emotions they want us to feel. But not that clear sometimes, or it is me just being dumb?🤣 Overall 4.8! Great Novel with a Huge Potential!  *The way I see it(chapter 36) The story's MC is like an MC who will, or most of the time be an underdog. So you guys must be patient!🤣 *Comment your thoughts🤣 or questions🤔

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Earth's Greatest Magus

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ZainDeveras
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Oh wow, that is an excellent summary of the premise.

ZainDeveras
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Thumbs up for you. :)

DaoistKK79Zy
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you need to mention plot armour problem . Your summary is great , but plot armour will indeed annoy many people(it's just ridiculously high for our main mc). Other main characters its ok

IsiahGames
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Well i mean We dont Find out till later and until chapter like 40 his fully human something happened that awakened his genes i guess.

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CanYouMakeItClear
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wow thanks.

ZainDeveras:Oh wow, that is an excellent summary of the premise.
CanYouMakeItClear
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sorry I guess? I mean at the start. You can already saw that the MC is not a human because of his mother and the kingdom etc.(and a lot of things happening).

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Dave_S
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Then ill Retract my comment :)

IsiahGames:Well i mean We dont Find out till later and until chapter like 40 his fully human something happened that awakened his genes i guess.
ANahid
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thanks for this

CanYouMakeItClear
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glad to help you

ANahid:thanks for this
Trick_Pegasus
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True

Chadenz_Domingo
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by

Chadenz_Domingo
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UC to lldllygpulttt

random_SYSTEM
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exp

ParimalChaos
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This is kind of like a harry Potter rip off. with mc being the harry Potter and klea (kleapatra) being Hermione.something like that. but good overall

Last_Lost
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nice

Megan_Arias
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is there romance in this story so far?

JustAFoXInTheDark
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Im at chapter 127 and mc is frustating he decided to trust random stranger and then doesnt trust his friends its just frustating this guy is

Araa_Nain
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Yes, and here i am, find it funny that many reader hate this story

Allvheaven
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Who would not say that in my opinion this work is very good. I recommend reading. I've read 300 chapters so far and I'm wondering if this story will have a harem?

AWESOME_01
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Of course we hate this story. Such dogsh*t Mc with the worst naive trusting personality that even a baby would be more intelligent than him

Araa_Nain:Yes, and here i am, find it funny that many reader hate this story