Review Detail of RJMidnight in When Alpha created Omega

Interesting story, I love how you describe things and write the inner thoughts of the main character. Straight romance and female lead isn’t my thing, but the first person POV makes me forgot the gender of the charater and lets me get immerse in the story until it is reminded that she is female. Your problems lie in grammar. You have mistakes in not using punctuations when needed, misspelled words and confusing wording, and spacing with a few words and dialogue. I would try to put this through grammarly (it works well, I like using it), to fix those mistakes. Other than that, keep up the good work!