finally a fanfiction of ben 10 that pays, the ones i found so far was just bad trash!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I loved this story, it is being well organized and developed without much ado, I could see the changes that will happen in the original series without having to unnecessarily postpone the holidays where it will really be exciting, it has a lot of potential and I think it can become the best fanfiction ben 10 self insert after all to very few people who work on such a fanfiction even less those who make good of it

It's a good start to history, waiting for more. It's a good start to history, waiting for more. It's a good start to history, waiting for more.

I haven't read the first chapter yet, but just reading your "chapter pilot introduction" has already made you like this fanfic, you seem to understand a lot about the original work (unlike some people who only see three episodes and already think of it as enough content to create a fic), which already makes me very happy. I'm going to read your first chapter and I hope it's not just another good fanfic thrown out. Ah! Before I forget, I'm also BR, so it doesn't matter if your English is refined or not, because mine is certainly much worse (according to my English teacher I'm "SIMPLY, VERY BAD!" Kkk)

It looks cool, you can make a good fanfic with the plot of Ben 10 😁 I read the first chapter and really liked it, finally an author who seems to know what he is doing. I look forward to more chapters

More chapters, more chapters, more chapters, more chapters, more chapters, more chapters, more chapters, more chapters, more chapters, more chapters, more chapters ..., ..., ..., ..., more chapters.

Very good !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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As you already have experience with your other stories, I would only say that I am happy that you wrote about this series that not many dare to write, and I cannot wait to see all the wonderful things that your protagonist does and of course the progress of the girls.