Review Detail of Hemy in Power of the Author

Item: Power of the Author
Rating: 1.8

Review detail

HemyLv143yrHemy

half assed MC. pretty stupid for his age. let emotions control his actions. doesn't plan enough. don't have common sense or survival instincts. super angsty teenager. annoyingly idiotic

Power of the Author

MarSus

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MarSusAuthorMarSus

Thanks for the review! I'll continuously try to improve it and make him more likeable.

3yr

HemyLv14Hemy

your welcome. it's just an opinion. not meant to diss or anything.

3yr

MarSusAuthorMarSus

No probs lmao! it's my first time so any criticism is appreciated too >:D

Hemy:your welcome. it's just an opinion. not meant to diss or anything.

3yr

Ryuu23Lv5Ryuu23

Harem?

MarSus:Thanks for the review! I'll continuously try to improve it and make him more likeable.

3yr

MarSusAuthorMarSus

:>>> uh XD might introduce a love interest but idk about harem tbh hahahah

Ryuu23:Harem?

3yr