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MarSus

MarSus

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My friend was doing it so i got curious :)

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  • MarSus
    MarSus7mth
    Replied to Zyes1

    hi, i did some searches, and one that stood out was how Itachi used a girl to hit on Jiraiya. I doubt the girl had chakra, so i assumed that u don't need chakra to be hit with genjutsu

    Yet at this time, an unexpected torrent swept through his consciousness. Reality warped and twisted, ensnaring his senses in a relentless cycle of betrayal. Within the clutches of a genjutsu, the scene of his friend's betrayal replayed with haunting persistence.
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  • MarSus
    MarSus7mth
    Replied to TERRA_999

    Yup thats correct 👍

    Ch 3 The Harsh Forest
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  • MarSus
    MarSus8mth
    Replied to xevers

    Hi! yes I think it wasn't clear. He steals the ability of people/animals and purely the ability. The energy he uses right now is purely from the system and his body. So it's not really chakra (though I'll explain it more later but you can just assume what he's using now is not chakra). It is an incomprehensible energy designed from the system. Sorry it's kind of vague :)

    Ch 9 Sai
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  • MarSus
    MarSus8mth
    Replied to XtrEEm

    Hi, he is detected by the barrier team, it's the guards blocking the entrance that could not spot him due to his invisibility

    His plan unfurled flawlessly. As he reached the apex of the wall, he knew the moment had come. The guards remained oblivious, their duty unchanged by his subtle intrusion. Kai's breath hitched, his form solidifying as he stepped onto Konoha's hallowed ground.
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  • MarSus
    MarSus8mth
    Replied to ISuMin

    RIGHT! Hahaha. I'm sorry I really can't keep up with all the age and time as their character ages feel really inconsistent at the beginning. I changed the time to years. Hope it helps with the immersion. :)

    Itachi's movements were a symphony of grace and precision. His actions were calculated, his strategy unfurling with the deliberate intent of a masterful tactician. As the battle progressed, Kai's fatigue became palpable, his chakra reserves dwindling beneath the relentless barrage of Itachi's counterattacks.
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  • MarSus
    MarSus8mth
    Replied to GojoSatoru_6969

    Hey! Thanks for the Review, I'll think about redoing it. But No Promises

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  • MarSus
    MarSus2yr
    Replied to TiagoRits

    Hi! I make 2 webnovels and the other main character is called Kai, so I mixed up the name This webnovel is original from me though

    Ch 5 Exam?
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  • MarSus
    MarSus2yr
    Commented

    What should Shin respond ? ;)

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  • MarSus
    MarSus2yr
    Replied to Stressed_Ultra

    :") What can you expect from the number 1 unpredictable ninja Naruto amirite? hahahaha

    Ch 10 Scamming Naruto?
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  • MarSus
    MarSus2yr
    Replied to Rysangel

    :DDD

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  • MarSus
    MarSus2yr
    Replied to Poseidon_1_

    Hmmm well this is just my opinion, but i doubt it since the third hokage wanted to hide naruto’s origin to avoid minato’s enemies from assassinating naruto but i might be wrong not too sure

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  • MarSus
    MarSus2yr
    Replied to ZoneTail

    😜

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  • MarSus
    MarSus2yr
    Replied to Stressed_Ultra

    🤭🤭

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  • MarSus
    MarSus2yr
    Commented

    HAHAHA to be fair, i guess he’s just too surprised lmaoo that it clouded his judgement

    Shin was too busy covering himself up with the blanket on the bed before he yelled out "Pause!" to all three of them. It was lucky for Shin that there were only three of them, or things might have been wrong. He took his dirty clothes and wore them again, albeit in disgust, before escaping through the hotel window. Unfortunately, the room was actually on the third floor of the inn, and he panicked too quickly and jumped down to the ground. This was a man with no chakra. His body was slightly crushed with broken bones, but it regenerated without problem.
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  • MarSus
    MarSus2yr
    Replied to ZoneTail

    >:D

    Ch 5 Exam?
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  • MarSus
    MarSus2yr
    Replied to Stressed_Ultra

    Thank you! Hope you continue to enjoy it :)

    Ch 4 The Next Morning
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  • MarSus
    MarSus2yr
    Replied to Poseidon_1_

    Actually i dont know whats the requirement :>, but i guess for now I'll put it as secondary level hehe

    "A-Academics?" Shin asked reconfirming... Shoot, Shin was not born in a well-off family, so to go to school was a luxury that he could not afford. He's only learnt materials till primary level school due to mandatory law requirements, and quit afterwards to find labour works...
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  • MarSus
    MarSus2yr
    Replied to Abeeba

    Oh shoot sorry im mixing it up w another webnovel, it's fixed now :)

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  • MarSus
    MarSus2yr
    Replied to Saiyan7700

    hi, to clarify, he only read till before the shippuden. So he doesn't know obito yet.

    Ch 3 The Fourth's
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  • MarSus
    MarSus2yr
    Replied to whitethief274

    Hmmm yeah its roughly quite accurate. The guy who died was part of inari’s squad. New OC should be still mysterious though maybe his skills shows off hints of whom he might be related to hehe

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