Review Detail of Elder in In Naruto: Reborn with Talent

Not them. The Author. It's the Authors decision to implement this into the story.

I have read more comments and I find that I might have written it in an easily misunderstood way. I will be posting a small 'explanation' in Ch41.

no you are not, you wrote it really good, they just looked at it, read it till the chapter is about him imagining if he should "deport" some young masters to hell, then complaining about it

that true

dumbass who cant even read properly making a review thats incorrect in every single way ... didnt get a single detail right lol

He did get it right though, the Author just changed everything after everyone complained about the chapter so he made up a solution for the problem and made it as if it never happened at all.

if you look at the age of chapter 39 you see it is a whole day older then this review so nope

Konoha shinobi? Where? Froze the whole capital? When? Kill 500 000 children? What? I think you're in the wrong story, that or you need some glasses.

Author changed the chapter after a lot of people complained on it

7 months late but eh, w/e. :D I wish I had enough time to change chapters just because people are complaining about something. Do you really think I am THAT free? Lol. Get a life.

Your response seems illogical, writer. Just because I accuse you of changing a chapter so that it's like nothing happened doesn't mean I have no life. There is no connection between both terms. And besides, if you don't have the time, I hardly find it normal that you would scrounge for time just to toss an insult at little old me.

To be franc with you, the most disapointing is that you started developing other continent just to develope on and throw the other out, ending the story xD. Except if the last chapter is an Epiloge to the volume and not the novel?

Mhm, if you took that as an insult, then I am sorry. It was meant as sarcasm. Writing over 400 chapters takes time and a lot of effort. You might think that I somehow pulled it outta my posterior with a magic wand but nope, that's not how these things go. The whole fanfic has over 600k words which are basically 6 whole books worth of word count. With posting one chapter every work day, I was happy that I could at least correct my wonky grammar, much less actually go back and rewrite entire chapters because one or two guys didn't like it. Also... killing 500k children? Really? Do you actually believe that was in the story? Heh, now I feel my intelligence was deeply insulted. I doubt the whole Water Capital could have that many people, much less just children. There, that's a real argument.

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