All i see when reading this story A multi-galaxy level entity doing everything he wants for the reasons to satisfy his vanity. This actions are: 1. Has the capability to save a family, to let the mother be with her daughter but due to his reasons of wanting everything the same as what happen on the story that he once read/watch on screen that he prefer to let the daughter a child less than 8yo below to suffer in the streets and letting the mother know that he is capable to reunite them as family but wont because in his word " Thay would be boring" saying it with a smile. 2. The Mc as a character is already a "lost case". For all the experience that he accumulate to other destructive, decieving, cutthroat worlds that he should be experiencing first hand you might as well think that all the innocent lives, deaths that would have been avoided will be save for him being active but what we got is an galaxy level entity would prefer to have their deaths pave his way to have an "easy" life. 3. Fearing/avoiding the UNKNOWN. For all of his strenght and capability you would have think that his mature enough to feel pity to having knowledge to the people that would be suffering and could be avoided if he set-aside his childish mindset of letting "canon" go and face his challenges no matter insignificant they may be. 4. Overall his character is the same as those power wankers story with a mindset and mentality of a child but with more in depth explanation and development. Writing quality is readible, grammar is understandable with a minor spelling error. Thats just my point of view review of the story.
Liked by 30 people
LIKE
Okay mate first of all, tell me how many chapters you have read? 1. Akeno never suffered. In cannon she travelled aimlessly for a year while in story, she didn't. 2. Whose death you are talking about? 3. Fearing unknown? MC only talked this so that they don't have to rely on mc and become strong. And facing challenges? what type of challenge is there. If he was to solve everything by his powers then it will ultimately become a collectables harem which Webnovel has. Try to take wuxia and 'becoming strong and protect loved ones' out of your brain then read. If an elephant wanted to adjust in colony of ants by just crushing the Queen then there won't be much of a story. And first try to read sypnosis. Mc is childish so you should be enjoying this fic because your babbling is that of a child. I have said in sypnosis that mc will follow plot because he want to release trihexa and for that he has to do ground work. As for grammar, mister I can't blame you for that because there are large number of English professors in Webnovel who has even shit* grammar than content maker.
And you want what all problems solved in single chapter and some materials for fapping? This is not r18 child.
You already answered my disatisfaction as a reader point of view that his childish. Can't blame that his childish as what was written in the synopsis. 1. Akeno's case, i read the part where she was kick out of the house crying. While surviving the outside world as whatxwas written; earning some penny by purifying evils and going from place to place while thinking about if his mother was dead or raped etc. Even if its just a few days as what you commented which is contradicting to the statement of the story which looks like a week at best ; you think letting a child wander street alone while thinking with his loved one is not cruel? 2. My comment can also be interpreted into situations. Chuch experiment, Shuri's case, Cat sisters. Yes, if he solved everything in 1 chapter it this stpry will be a goner if you cant think of what to do next but still my statememts are valid no matter how you see it that he is a "Lost case" of a human being by already knowing it but still letting it happen just to satisfy his 'amusement' as what he said. 3. Is collecting pokemon route is the only route you see if the people hate your story? Im not saying i hate it, im even reading it cause im entertained. No, there a lot of ways you can create a unique story that which will may contradict to your Mc if you change his personality or if you keep his childish personality and make yor own twist of the story like; Letting the humans know of the supernatural. Thats just one of many unique routes that you can create in the story. Well i know creating your own unique twist is not as easy as it seems to be thats why i admire authors who go out there way spicing the story to what they deem perfect or good enough. In conclusion: Im just one of many readers that you will be having that will have different thought process on how we enjoy/ entertain ourself to what we read and will have different opinions/reviews to what insights we have obtain on the story and this is mine. Currently im at chapter 38.
